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Zhylle_Bugay
Zhylle_BugayLv24yr
2020-10-19 13:40

Grammar and spelling- the grammar is ok..there are some spelling that are wrong..the sentences are not constructed properly..... 3 stars(improve it man) Updating stability- it is horrible.. 3 stars ( I'm patient so it's ok) Story development- well its not really bad but you can't say it's excellent too.. but I like the powers and the flow of the story.... 4 stars ( good job) Character Development- well he's a chaotic good boy.... With overpowed powers.... 5 stars ( excellent) World background- it's multiverse I think... It's still not original... But I like the world you choose.... 4 stars (good job) A guy that got reincarnated into a tree with an overpowered power... An good story I must say......

Growing As A Sapling In the Multiverses (Worm CYOA v1)

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4.6
10 Chs

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jeffmiste
jeffmisteLv4

you better fucking go to worm later in this fanfic because I'm fucking sick of seeing these "worm coya" where the main character doesn't actually go to worm and just has some powers from the cyoa, and for some fucking reason they all go to dxd out of left field like goddam just go to worm you stupid fucks, it isn't a worm cyoa if you don't go to worm.

4yr

uflesh940
uflesh940Lv3

I dropped this fairly early on, because the MC was just too... aimless. The MC is well within the realm of godhood by chapter three, but he doesn't really do anything with his newfound powers. You're a sapling? Give yourself a shapeshifting power and turn back into a human. Wanna help the Uzumaki? Use a power that makes people decide not to attack them in the first place. Miss your family? Give yourself the right power and teleport home. Instead, the MC gives himself powers, seemingly just for the sake of having powers. And many of the powers are completely pointless. What use is "enhanced strength" when you're a tree? Planning on lifting some weights? With what arms? And you already have telekinesis! So why the enhanced strength? It boggles my mind.

2yr
amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4

Didnt read, not a review . Author, i am interested in ur story but i dont know anything about wrom cyo or whatever it is. Will i be able to understand ur bk and get any relevant referneces or will u provide info? Also what is worm? I have come across this term in ffs but have no idea what it is

4yr
_Asterisk_
_Asterisk_Lv4

Please update more of this, it is quite enjoyable and refreshing kind of story and I hope he could at least a love interest like the Yuki girl and help her love as long as him. Thank Author ❤️

2yr
minhazxz
minhazxzLv5

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4yr
sunschao
sunschaoLv4

excellent story so far and im liking the concept alot hopefully the mc gets more involved in things but not in a fanboy way.............................

4yr
Theory_of_Orange
Theory_of_OrangeLv11

4yr
Ezukejyll
EzukejyllLv6

Yes!!! you are back!!!! please tell me you are planning to continue this fanfic....I've been waiting for updates on the forums and now you are on this site T-T

4yr
0Darknorth0
0Darknorth0Lv4

I like the context of the story, and the character is out of the ordinary, I don't give you 5 stars because I need to see how the story plays out later

4yr
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