Item: A Slime in MCU
Rating: 2.8
Author: Alfha_Robby

Alfha_RobbyLv64yr

2020-10-06 22:15

alright I have lots of reason why I rate this story below 3 star but im gonna save another poor soul before they read this story so 1. Author decide to make MC aka Lucifer Stupid & did more stupid stuff in order to expand word count, some problem could easily be solve in few paragraph but nope author decide to make mc did stupid stuff in order to increase the word count like directly hacking SHIELD & get himself interrogate while he could simply use his other identity to solve his problem including lucifer bootlicking Tony stark because he didn't want to build his own connection. 2. Author Strictly would never ever let mc do some drastic action & make sure the story line strictly follow the cannon making this story a self insert rewrite wish fulfillment novel, no idea whether there'll be Harem since I drop this story. 3. Author way too underestimate the infinte stone of MCU.

A Slime in MCU

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Shameless author review. this novel is really good. Good Grammer. flowing storyline. Good character design. just created to stave of boredom. didn't find anything to read on this site so thought maybe create some of my own.

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Going good so far , definitely following it! No HAREM please!! No HAREM please!!No HAREM please!!No HAREM please!!No HAREM please!!No HAREM please!!No HAREM please!!No HAREM please!!No HAREM please!!No HAREM please!!No HAREM please!!

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Author keeps giving the MC abilities that he clearly does not have, it's super stupid and annoying. MC is very stupid, and keeps making weird decisions. Plot is kinda forced, and MC is not allowed to change the timeline, or someone will smite him or something idiotic like that. It's very clear to see from here that the author actually has no understanding of Marvel, or Slime.

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DONT DROP DONT DROP DONT DROP DONT DROP DONT DROP DONT DROP DONT DROP DONT DROP DONT DROP DONT DROP DONT DROP DONT DROP DONT DROP DONT DROP DONT DROP DONT DROP

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I'm not even gonna waste my time typing more than this. it's not worth it

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Horribly naive and it just smells of wish-fullfillment and not the feel good type... The author probably didn't even read the web novel nor the light novel... it feels that he's knowledge regarding tensei shitara slime datta ken is superficial at best, just took some powers from there and bam! that's it! while I understand that it's fanfiction and the cannon rules are to be loosely followed, this is just *******ish at best, Ancient One "just felt" that mc is good and kind and wouldn't pose a threat... and the name... Lucifer... really? I know how hard it is to come up with original names but really?

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