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Aeternabilis
AeternabilisLv144yr
2020-09-30 11:32

Not a great read tbh, there are many things wrong with this fic. First of all the power scaling is fcked, he absorbs part of a celestial and the time stone in the first chapter and you have him being just a bit stronger than the Ancient one. It's like the author has no idea of the power scaling of marvel. Another thing is the mc doesn't show any character growth. He went from being a human to slime then killing loads of corrupt sht for two years and still acts like a child. The mc suddenly has all the random ass ability that comes from nowhere. Like I don't rly mind it but like where are these abilities coming from? Also, the mc isn't allowed to change the timeline of the story or he will be smited. Like wtf is the point of the story if he doesn't change anything? The mc having an alter ego of a woman and that woman being portrayed as his big sister? I just find this so weird and pointless. I hate the fact he is a coward and tries to hide behind this woman. Also surely doing this would affect him? But once again he shows no difference in personality. Lastly, as I don't want to go on even more xD You have the mc born into the mcu and you make him be with an oc.... like out of all the woman in the mcu an oc is what you chose? Seriously? Also, meets her and then the next chapter they are already together like wtf???? Gl to the author

A Slime in MCU

DaoistLeon
3.9
46 Chs

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DaoistLeon
DaoistLeonAuthor

Shameless author review. this novel is really good. Good Grammer. flowing storyline. Good character design. just created to stave of boredom. didn't find anything to read on this site so thought maybe create some of my own.

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Mortifer
MortiferLv14

You get a protagonist who have absorbed a part of a celestial and replicated the time stone get fucking captured by fury on purpose. Pathetic

4yr
RaizelF
RaizelFLv12

Going good so far , definitely following it! No HAREM please!! No HAREM please!!No HAREM please!!No HAREM please!!No HAREM please!!No HAREM please!!No HAREM please!!No HAREM please!!No HAREM please!!No HAREM please!!No HAREM please!!

4yr
Dayside
DaysideLv12

Author keeps giving the MC abilities that he clearly does not have, it's super stupid and annoying. MC is very stupid, and keeps making weird decisions. Plot is kinda forced, and MC is not allowed to change the timeline, or someone will smite him or something idiotic like that. It's very clear to see from here that the author actually has no understanding of Marvel, or Slime.

4yr
_MASTER_
_MASTER_Lv10

DONT DROP DONT DROP DONT DROP DONT DROP DONT DROP DONT DROP DONT DROP DONT DROP DONT DROP DONT DROP DONT DROP DONT DROP DONT DROP DONT DROP DONT DROP DONT DROP

4yr
Ouranos_Gein
Ouranos_GeinLv14

I'm not even gonna waste my time typing more than this. it's not worth it

4yr
CrazyNousagi
CrazyNousagiLv4

Horribly naive and it just smells of wish-fullfillment and not the feel good type... The author probably didn't even read the web novel nor the light novel... it feels that he's knowledge regarding tensei shitara slime datta ken is superficial at best, just took some powers from there and bam! that's it! while I understand that it's fanfiction and the cannon rules are to be loosely followed, this is just *******ish at best, Ancient One "just felt" that mc is good and kind and wouldn't pose a threat... and the name... Lucifer... really? I know how hard it is to come up with original names but really?

4yr
PsyLoRD
PsyLoRDLv5

MC is too passive, OC as romance, MC transforming into a woman all these things make you lose the motivation to keep reading (Because you already can see what will happen and it's not good)

4yr
Hunter_101
Hunter_101Lv13

why the **** does he cares about shield just do what you want your powerfull shield will come to him eventually for weapon and shit so why be a prisoner

4yr
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