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DaoistLeon
DaoistLeonAuthor4yr
2020-09-15 18:29

Shameless author review. this novel is really good. Good Grammer. flowing storyline. Good character design. just created to stave of boredom. didn't find anything to read on this site so thought maybe create some of my own.

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ChesterCure
ChesterCureLv4

if it's a harem just give him at least 2 or 3 girls, cause more make it like a fucking Pokemon.

newthings
newthingsLv6

is this rewrite, ive seen similar novel

shashank_bhatt
shashank_bhattLv14

Should Be posting it on the ff genre I am sure there are many who would love this

GrapeLord69
GrapeLord69Lv13

Havent read it yet but hope u dont Drop it

GodZilla
GodZillaLv14

Grammar

XantosZ
XantosZLv13

Hello author, just a small comment of labling this magical realism. This isnt it, magical realism is a a book with an established group who knows about magic. A great example is Harry Potter. Not everyone knows about magic but some groups of people do, that is the halmark of magical realism.

Overwrit
OverwritLv3

Good character design * laugh *

spiderman3_4
spiderman3_4Lv13

Please please PLEASE please don't stop, i haven't started reading it yet, but I'm already hooked

Lazy_NEET_Cat_UmU
Lazy_NEET_Cat_UmULv11

then read to latest chap and you will know.. good character design my ass..

spiderman3_4:Please please PLEASE please don't stop, i haven't started reading it yet, but I'm already hooked
Troll3r
Troll3rLv4

please make more plz I need this in my life!

Alfha_Robby
Alfha_RobbyLv6

beware mc act stupid & lapdog of SHIELD despite being OP, really hate Beta MC im outta here

Hdfgggythhgffghh14
Hdfgggythhgffghh14Lv2

No harem

Hdfgggythhgffghh14
Hdfgggythhgffghh14Lv2

NEVER A HAREM

Hdfgggythhgffghh14
Hdfgggythhgffghh14Lv2

But never stop making it

Gods_Clown
Gods_ClownLv4

Pls Tell me this is only on hitaus I hope it isn‘t dropped

Hero_Of_Charity
Hero_Of_CharityLv10

U need move this novel to #FanFic section dude, hard to find this fanfic in normal section

StuckInTheInternet
StuckInTheInternetLv4

Had me at no harem or romance. Let's go.

VictorElderblood
VictorElderbloodLv13

Your a NTR mc

Hdfgggythhgffghh14:NEVER A HAREM
VictorElderblood
VictorElderbloodLv13

Just saying that you got reborn in a world that have 23% of man in 77% woman no harem your a NTR mc.

Hdfgggythhgffghh14:NEVER A HAREM
ANANTA
ANANTALv4

To The Author, Kindly continue the novel Make the MC an Anti-Hero with Full Solid Black Assassin Suit with best material, A Master of All Things in everthing beyond any level we can imagine - Magic( Rune, Wizardry, Sorcery, etc.,) Martial Art( Chi, Cultivator and varies combat Arts) Science(Inventor, Scientist, Engineer,Medicine and Doctor etc.,) and many more things to Mastery. Make him the best in intellect(Science) and Combat Arts In level beyond the level even Bruce Wayne(BATMAN) can't imagine. Make Mutants into Meta-Humans. Also, Keep the Characters from Both Western and Eastern Heroes from Comics and already known characters. Hope to see these soon! Thanks! Reader. 2. To the author, since your fanfic is mostly like the Mix of MCU and EARTH 616 - Make to MC to go back in the past in The Library Of Calegastro learn all the Magic there copy all those books distribute to Kamar Taj and copy for himself as well make him go to Mimir and Yggdrasil to gain more about Runes and Knowledge of Various ARTS(Magic, Combat, Tech-Magic or Etc., just make it up also make him do the works to influence people on Earth to save nature through Tech-Magic to save Earth Environment To Make the Qi, Ki, Chi , Mana Richer on Earth than any other place in the whole Multiverse) of the whole Universe or Multiverse. Thanks! - Reader.

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