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Agustusceacer
AgustusceacerLv34yr
2020-10-09 16:46

The story is well-paced but there were some instances about the MC that really confused me as a reader. But still, it's a well-written story despite the grammar errors. And I am curious to know how the story goes.

The Abandoned Hunter

1st_Manga_KING
4.1
238 Chs

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1st_Manga_KING
1st_Manga_KINGAuthor

Haha tnx for the review

4yr
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Blackleaf97
Blackleaf97Lv4

yooo can u spoil MC skill? just want to know before I read it

4yr
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dragon_heart_3549
dragon_heart_3549Lv14

when I read the description the first thing I thought was solo leveling

4yr
4
Kritiko
KritikoLv10

is the grammar fixed already or not yet?

1st_Manga_KING:Haha tnx for the review
4yr
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Ace_7325
Ace_7325Lv3

Bbnnk

4yr
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_fok_off_tentacion
_fok_off_tentacionLv1

Hey how you doing? hopefully great or fine. please check out my work please , you wont be disappointed[img=recommend]

4yr
Maxi_rojas
Maxi_rojasLv2

Harem?

4yr
Red_Phantasm
Red_PhantasmLv3

.

4yr
Alex_Enriquez
Alex_EnriquezLv15

the story as a whole is bad. the mc does nothing. he stands around and gets dues ex machina all the way. and not the normal way no i mean he literally does nothing. the author uses the wrong words or misspelled almost 10 percent of every chapter. i cant recomend this in its current state

4yr
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Scartioa
ScartioaLv10

It's literally just solo levelling.

3yr
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Orange_Jo
Orange_JoLv14

Are the grammatical errors fixed yet

Alex_Enriquez:the story as a whole is bad. the mc does nothing. he stands around and gets dues ex machina all the way. and not the normal way no i mean he literally does nothing. the author uses the wrong words or misspelled almost 10 percent of every chapter. i cant recomend this in its current state
3yr
BLANK_Z
BLANK_ZLv13

I stayed true to my words and read past 40 chaps it was still bad MC is a chump and I mean the type that should have been given the name chump or at least his initials he rides the system and Is spoon fed everything his character development is nil so far and his IQ there are just random numbers author thought of really I can't recommend it to any one but it ain't bad past chapter 40 just in no way good

3yr
1
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Diamond_Air
Diamond_AirLv11

Love it! Plot's great and as everyone else says, it updates frequently XD. Your work keeps improving too. Good job author and keep it up! Will be sticking with this one.

4yr

1st_Manga_KING
1st_Manga_KINGAuthor

Oh well since this is my own book im giving it a full 5 star, i hope you give me your hinest reviews. I’m mot a pro so I might be making few sillu mistakes i hope you will notify me ans pardon me.

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Stormmanu
StormmanuLv4

The story is great and all but it lacks proper world building. The MC is supposed be intelligent according to the author but MC acts like emotionaly unstable idiot. The flow of the story is a bit lacking and the MC some how kills s level creatures even though he himself is low leveled and what heck is it about an s level taxi driver! And the constant exited yelling of the MC gets on your nerve while reading. The overall Idea and concept of the story is great but presentation is lacking

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Marcelinho_Ggazeli
Marcelinho_GgazeliLv10

it started out cool but then a level character started to come out of nowhere, I don’t know if they’re rare hunters or Chinese cabbages, the MC takes a taxi and has an SS hunter there, the MC walks out on the street and meets a woman SS, MC is in the F level room in college but he really has a level S teacher, I believe that if MC throws bread on the street, 15 level S hunters will come out of the manhole, totally anti-climatic

4yr
Insane_Pumpkin
Insane_PumpkinLv11

Well over all this novel is rather good but the MC is complete contradiction of what i expected. In first chapters he was posed as the smart type but the next chapters make it looke like he exchanged 90% of his inteligence for plot armor and somehow some people remind me of poorly made npc's for mmorpg games... Also what's with the reviews being onlly 5 stars it's like author is deleting all other reviews... and why do i get this notification when i wanted to write the review when there were at least 5 reviews allready...??? "WoW! You would be the first reviewer if you leave your reviews right now!"

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LordofDemise
LordofDemiseLv13

The MC of this story has an iq of 185, but mind you. This story does not deal in regular iq levels, einstein pshhh who is that 10 iq for him. Smartest person to ever exist, ehhh u will get a 12. Its on the same scale as deji with his monstrous 189 iq. As a wise man once said His IQ is “Dumb High.” Its so high that he absorbs your brain cells while you are reading the book forcing you to lose them.

4yr
Alcheluk
AlchelukLv12

Reveal spoiler

4yr
RuinSmith
RuinSmithLv15

Let me be honest with this story the 1st 30 chapter is a very tough on the reading as a lot of grammatical sentence continuity and spelling mistakes. With chapters being short for the 1st 50 or so on top of the generic plot/character progression. I would hold off until the writer gets an editor to proof read his current chapters and go back through and edit the existing ones because their are sentences that don't make sense.

4yr
Gauri_9720
Gauri_9720Lv1

It's a very good story and I love it.....It updates frequently and it's quite interesting too...I love the way of explaining in this story...overall it's a good story

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