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AgustusceacerLv34yr
2020-10-09 08:46

The story is well-paced but there were some instances about the MC that really confused me as a reader. But still, it's a well-written story despite the grammar errors. And I am curious to know how the story goes.

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1st_Manga_KINGAuthor

Haha tnx for the review

Blackleaf97Lv4

yooo can u spoil MC skill? just want to know before I read it

dragon_heart_3549Lv14

when I read the description the first thing I thought was solo leveling

KritikoLv10

is the grammar fixed already or not yet?

1st_Manga_KING:Haha tnx for the review
Ace_7325Lv3

Bbnnk

_fok_off_tentacionLv1

Hey how you doing? hopefully great or fine. please check out my work please , you wont be disappointed[img=recommend]

Maxi_rojasLv2

Harem?

Red_PhantasmLv3

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Alex_EnriquezLv15

the story as a whole is bad. the mc does nothing. he stands around and gets dues ex machina all the way. and not the normal way no i mean he literally does nothing. the author uses the wrong words or misspelled almost 10 percent of every chapter. i cant recomend this in its current state

ScartioaLv10

It's literally just solo levelling.

Orange_JoLv14

Are the grammatical errors fixed yet

Alex_Enriquez:the story as a whole is bad. the mc does nothing. he stands around and gets dues ex machina all the way. and not the normal way no i mean he literally does nothing. the author uses the wrong words or misspelled almost 10 percent of every chapter. i cant recomend this in its current state
BLANK_ZLv13

I stayed true to my words and read past 40 chaps it was still bad MC is a chump and I mean the type that should have been given the name chump or at least his initials he rides the system and Is spoon fed everything his character development is nil so far and his IQ there are just random numbers author thought of really I can't recommend it to any one but it ain't bad past chapter 40 just in no way good

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