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Stormmanu
StormmanuLv44yr
2020-12-19 04:28

The story is great and all but it lacks proper world building. The MC is supposed be intelligent according to the author but MC acts like emotionaly unstable idiot. The flow of the story is a bit lacking and the MC some how kills s level creatures even though he himself is low leveled and what heck is it about an s level taxi driver! And the constant exited yelling of the MC gets on your nerve while reading. The overall Idea and concept of the story is great but presentation is lacking

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Small_Person
Small_PersonLv2

Yeah... I agree. Him “yelling” make him seem like a shounen mc. These types of shounen mc are scared to hurt girls. If a girl hit him for “comedic effect” he’d probably just laugh it off.

YohanHK
YohanHKLv11

Imo you’re being too nice. Only 22 chaps in but mc just seems like an idiot. I can only assume that his IQ test was swapped out and he suffers from some sort of disability.

Small_Person:Yeah... I agree. Him “yelling” make him seem like a shounen mc. These types of shounen mc are scared to hurt girls. If a girl hit him for “comedic effect” he’d probably just laugh it off.
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