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Stormmanu
StormmanuLv43yr
2020-12-19 04:28

The story is great and all but it lacks proper world building. The MC is supposed be intelligent according to the author but MC acts like emotionaly unstable idiot. The flow of the story is a bit lacking and the MC some how kills s level creatures even though he himself is low leveled and what heck is it about an s level taxi driver! And the constant exited yelling of the MC gets on your nerve while reading. The overall Idea and concept of the story is great but presentation is lacking

The Abandoned Hunter

1st_Manga_KING
4.1
238 Chs

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Small_Person
Small_PersonLv2

Yeah... I agree. Him “yelling” make him seem like a shounen mc. These types of shounen mc are scared to hurt girls. If a girl hit him for “comedic effect” he’d probably just laugh it off.

3yr
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YohanHK
YohanHKLv11

Imo you’re being too nice. Only 22 chaps in but mc just seems like an idiot. I can only assume that his IQ test was swapped out and he suffers from some sort of disability.

Small_Person:Yeah... I agree. Him “yelling” make him seem like a shounen mc. These types of shounen mc are scared to hurt girls. If a girl hit him for “comedic effect” he’d probably just laugh it off.
3yr
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1st_Manga_KING
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Oh well since this is my own book im giving it a full 5 star, i hope you give me your hinest reviews. I’m mot a pro so I might be making few sillu mistakes i hope you will notify me ans pardon me.

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Marcelinho_Ggazeli
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it started out cool but then a level character started to come out of nowhere, I don’t know if they’re rare hunters or Chinese cabbages, the MC takes a taxi and has an SS hunter there, the MC walks out on the street and meets a woman SS, MC is in the F level room in college but he really has a level S teacher, I believe that if MC throws bread on the street, 15 level S hunters will come out of the manhole, totally anti-climatic

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LordofDemise
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The MC of this story has an iq of 185, but mind you. This story does not deal in regular iq levels, einstein pshhh who is that 10 iq for him. Smartest person to ever exist, ehhh u will get a 12. Its on the same scale as deji with his monstrous 189 iq. As a wise man once said His IQ is “Dumb High.” Its so high that he absorbs your brain cells while you are reading the book forcing you to lose them.

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RuinSmith
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Let me be honest with this story the 1st 30 chapter is a very tough on the reading as a lot of grammatical sentence continuity and spelling mistakes. With chapters being short for the 1st 50 or so on top of the generic plot/character progression. I would hold off until the writer gets an editor to proof read his current chapters and go back through and edit the existing ones because their are sentences that don't make sense.

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