Alex_Enriquez

this is lazy. this is the third chapter already that gas been released out of order. since this keeps happening and this is somthing that is paid for someone needs to held responsible. after all how many people paid for chapters and got doubles of the same chapter instead of new ones. this is equal to theft. even if its only $0.30, that adds up quickly over the how many readers 1000 or so thats roughly $200 ish in theft.

the story as a whole is bad. the mc does nothing. he stands around and gets dues ex machina all the way. and not the normal way no i mean he literally does nothing. the author uses the wrong words or misspelled almost 10 percent of every chapter. i cant recomend this in its current state

a good premise. my only complaint is the repetitions in the explanations. ive read a few hundred chapters and 2/3 are reexplaining the same concept endlessly. i hope this is due to translation loss and not actual writing quality. the readable parts are entertaining. however i cannot enjoy a book that spends most of every chapter reexplaining what it said in chapter one.