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GoatManLv11yr
2023-07-15 21:58

There are several major issues with this novel. First, how can it be called a 'realistic take on Pokemon when he has a system? (don't believe the description is a major focus in the novel). Second, the MC has crazy luck his first Pokemon has high talent despite being a 'random' selection it even has strong egg moves. Third, the MC's Pokemon find it easy to learn moves despite him doing nothing special with their training. Fourth, the MC was supposably a researcher for a lab when he was a kid, surely he would've been given a sponsorship by them if he was such a genius. Fifth, the MC acts like a child despite having memories of reincarnation. Sixth, at times there is wuxia and xianxia style writing which feels out of place, e.g. he was called a country bumpkin and crowds commentate fights with pointless and unrealistic dialogue. Look I know it's just fanfic and this is Webnovel so as a reader you're not exactly looking for gold but even the name of it is misleading so would not recommend it.

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Shadow_Zero100Lv3

Yeah, the Venu Family arc is a great "Chinese reference novel" plane characters like A, B and K (literally Wally but this guy have a Family OP with him) dude, the autor no have more names from this guys and decided named A, B y K. There are also the references to Naruto, which don't bother me, but repeating that Axel wants his Venusaur as "Hashirama" is very XD, but I will admit that I thought of a Greninja that could control ice like Zane from Ninjago years ago, even so , the system is an error, we are told many things like "If he doesn't have a system, how did he achieve such a thing?" It is something very condescending and annoying, I share your opinion, some Pokemon do not have broken eggs moves because yes, even if it had given something like Goring to Nidoran or a normal potential, it is too much convenience and more so in the Venu Family arc, the That Bulbasaur is kidnapped by the Mankeys so that Axel forms a bond is very XD, the script favors him in so many ways that it does not know how to explain many of the conveniences.

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