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  • GoatMan10 months ago
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    This gym leader is awful ngl. Would the league let someone who swears and yells sexist things at children hold such a position? I hope this is more corruption and not a genuine candidate.

  • GoatMan10 months ago
    Replied to Itzpheng

    Honestly even later in the fic, the adults don't get any better. All the adults are either glazing him for being a genius or acting like children themselves. For instance, in chapter 18 the cerulean city gym leader calls Flint a cuck in a televised match with the MC who is somewhat famous. Any political figure doing this would have a scandal yet he's acting like a rage bait influencer. This is a shame because other than this it's a pretty great fic so far.

  • GoatMana year ago
    Replied to Reyviel_Faesly

    Bro nothing in this novel makes sense when it comes to scale and time.

  • GoatMana year ago
    Replied to Daoists7udMy

    Whoever she says is the father will raise the kid because what are they gonna do? Disagree with her? She's more powerful than they are (both socially, physically and magically) nothing they do or say matters to her in the slightest. If they disagree they'll find themselves on the street with nothing or they'll be killed, so does it matter who the father is? This theoretical female mage controls these men's lives they can do nothing to hurt her directly.

  • GoatMan2 years ago
    Commented

    Peaked at 15 that's brutal lol.

  • GoatMan2 years ago
    Posted

    There are several major issues with this novel. First, how can it be called a 'realistic take on Pokemon when he has a system? (don't believe the description is a major focus in the novel). Second, the MC has crazy luck his first Pokemon has high talent despite being a 'random' selection it even has strong egg moves. Third, the MC's Pokemon find it easy to learn moves despite him doing nothing special with their training. Fourth, the MC was supposably a researcher for a lab when he was a kid, surely he would've been given a sponsorship by them if he was such a genius. Fifth, the MC acts like a child despite having memories of reincarnation. Sixth, at times there is wuxia and xianxia style writing which feels out of place, e.g. he was called a country bumpkin and crowds commentate fights with pointless and unrealistic dialogue. Look I know it's just fanfic and this is Webnovel so as a reader you're not exactly looking for gold but even the name of it is misleading so would not recommend it.

  • GoatMan2 years ago
    Posted

    The story is about how the MC is the chosen one which is again not really anything new. I don't understand why this is so highly rated tbh. The MC is pretty standard he is portrayed as this good-looking nice guy but is just a lustful little creep. One of the first things he did was hit on a 13-year-old which is just gross. He somehow runs into other perverts exclusively as these adult women keep falling for an immature child. The world-building doesn't seem to make sense as it says that regular soldiers are said to be below level 20 yet it takes the MC almost no time to get to level 8 meaning the balance is horrible and makes no sense. Overall if u wanna read self insert crap then you'll probably like this but if you want an actually good story with decent characters who aren't creepy then probably avoid it.

  • GoatMan2 years ago
    Commented

    Bruh come on Anakin wouldn't just take that.

  • GoatMan2 years ago
    Posted

    Just awful. It started as you would expect a novel with this title to, but not only are the 10 days incredibly drawn out with chapter 25 being early day 4 but the MC has already become a twisted narcissistic delusional arrogant psychopath by then. Who knows how much worse he'll become in the following 6 days? He's already provoking people and then holding grudges against them when they respond in the simulations.