I would say write at Questionable Questing lot less toxic there and the format is better

When you talk about pairing with Akua and Moka is that only the characters from that world. I’m just curious because most multiverse stories either have no pairings or like one or 2 from each world. I don’t care either way because the more people he goes in a relationship with the harder it is to write and just want to clarify.

Well outer Moka is made of part of the inner Moka that’s absorbed by her mom. I never finished the story so I don’t know for sure if she got those parts back and the mom became a separate person or if it was a total fusion in the end it’s up to you I was just curious.

Nah these 2? Are fine if he is gonna add more I hope it will be characters from other worlds.

When you say Moka for pairing do you mean both inner and outer or only one of them because outer Moka is literally inner Moka’s mom

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Ace that test

It doesn’t matter if the guys only translating he’s still reviewing the story. He could’ve been more polite but other than that he did nothing wrong, why you gotta be rude as well?

Didn’t he get injured when he rubbed the knife from that one guy when he was acting suicidal?

So wait did he steal Shido’s fire regeneration because he hasn’t had it so far like when he got that cut and similar things he didn’t flame heal them which I complained about earlier

I don’t even think he can die the flame spirit comes with healing Shido (original) took a fatal bullet and stood up perfectly fine like a minute later

Every chapter from this story is amazing I would probably be legitimately depressed when you finish this story eventually

Where did you find this cursed image I couldn’t breathe because I kept laughing hysterically when I saw this

Why is everyone complaining just because Leo isn’t there these chapters are great plus he probably needs them because it takes time to plan and write out the main chapters stop being a bunch of p*ssies not to mention the other characters are important and this is a good way to develop them and show it

This has to be one of the dumbest things ever after 2 years they finally find where the obvious smoke is is just plain dumb and on top of that it was apparently urgent and it took them 2 years for them to do something so basic plus one of the things that makes it urgent is clay a stationary resource so how do they not know where the smoke is but know they are missing out on clay

Specifically the abridged version

You could review the work over the only problem I have with the story is the grammar it really takes away from it

You dastardly fiend how could you use the long chapter-inator you monster

That and sacred savior

Yes the first sword magic knight is probably my favorite story