Review Detail of Intayaw_din_Dagem in Jack of Arts

hello Author I've read to chapter 3 chapter 3 has ruined your story, introducing gods dieties and their being multiple realms causes anything MC does as inconsequential and pointless to read if you delete that aspect and have MC just appear in a parallel world with system it is way better their is to many to list of novels similar to yours that are successful (Reincarnated MC) but only a very few that are successful when it shows the back works of universe so early

that is one of reasons why I'm really a superstar was so successful it was for its time a new genre you don't know the back ground of the ring you don't know reason MC was chosen for the ring

please delete chapter 3 and 4 it ruins the story let it be MC goes back in time and it is memories alternate timeline in his mind and the time travel due to going backwards was alot slower allowing him centuries within a couple minutes to analyse and learn everything he ever read learned or noticed in passing that would explain understanding of other languages, martial arts, advanced techniques in a range of fields think of the film limitless but MC would have it in reality