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2020-11-03 00:14

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People are complaining about Itachi, this and that. Who cares? You can't expect a writer to perfectly analyze a character study and implement it inside his story. There is no freedom in that. The content inside is very good. Xia Qinqyue is a b*tch in here. I like it. There are to many cough* cough* simps who compliment her cock in every story. You must know that no matter how hot someone is. You will be immediately repulsed by their attitude, I don't know you can't like everyone. If they have their mouths shut maybe they would be an angel. Girls need their tongues cut out if they act like that, but then again. This story is good in the content. Although I don't care about Itachi the story was enough to lead me to read the rest of the story. I liked the tension, but I am not a fan of Xia Lingxi and the way people and the mahua project her. Sounds like a clingy depressed person who can't shut the f*ck up from the way people write her and it's annoying, but yes. The content is good I liked how the Mc is around Xia Qinqyue cold, but when helped her with her veins. I don't know the author doesn't seem to know how to treat her from the writing. Almost as if he wants to rape her, but doesn't know if it's sexual attraction or dislike. It's very weird from the interactions for both of them and comes out that way. He gave in the end and was nice to her. Holy. I am dead, but yeah. Xia Qinqyue could go get banged by another guy. I wouldn't care. She's never been on my radar of interesting ever since I began the novel, but a good story, but btw. Itachi is okay, but you should have gone your own Oc. A lot more creative progress. Being a character feels like a stunted writers' down the road. I recommend just write what makes you excited in the situations to make it not boring.

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