In my opinion writing the character of itachi may be even harder than thinking of ideas for the progression of the fanfic. He is a complex character with many traits. For the first 20 chapters the author did a good job but in the 24th chapter it seemed to me that the author's patience finally worn out and he just said **** it🔥🔥 . Our pretty decent Itachi became too much original of a mc . Author Sama's ideas were actually quite good with ....optical nerve chakra connectivity and all .. The interaction between itachi and qingyue was well portrayed as well but it appeared too rushed when itachi left the xiao clan for training and that's where things when to rapid mode. Anyways I just want to say it was a nice start if author sama edits the latter chapters then I did give a rating of 4.5 although I am looking forward towards more updates if the author picks it up again. You have my support author sama 😁😁😁so please restart the good work and give us a long and finished atg fanfic for a change.
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