So I'm giving out my honest opinion here. If anyone here wants a good fic this ain't for you. The author was lazy and pretty much copy and pasted like 70 to 80 percent of the chapters from the original. It says Itachi but freak the mc probably isn't since the author sucks at writing or portraying characters. There are also tons of plot holes and to be straight foward this will probably be C-R-A-P since the author is only using it to get rid of his writers block on his other fanfic.
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LIKEHaven't really read the original novel. But, It seemed like Yun Che wasn't really that type of a scum. He was more like lost and a avenger, In a way. He pretty much lost his father-like figure (Or was it Grandfather-like figure? Dunno. But he was his teacher, so yeah.) In which he wqs the one who raised him. Yun Che was originally cunning in killing his enemies, and hateful as well. Then when he was reincarnated, He didn't seem like he was supposed to be, I guess? Besides, Their world's laws are different compared to us, in morals as well. Common sense, kinda, But meh. If he was scum for doing sht to that girl and stuff. I'd say that some, or most girls like Xia Quinyue or whatever her name was, Is a litterally the person I wouldn't even bother to be friends, or even want to be near at, at all. Anybody with common sense would rather not talk to her, or even want to be friends in how shtty she is. The way she was potrayed and her actions definitely makes her a btch to me. And wouldn't even bother with this kind of person in my life at all. Anyways... I diverted from the main topic about Yun Che, But it explained my part on Yun Che's reaction being dumb. Actually, When a author potrays the character their personality, morals, actions and intelligence. They then later on makes them dumb in most situations. Like it has no logic at all. So, blame the author itself in how Yun Che acts like when he litterally isn't like that in most parts and etc. And has no development in character. But instead develops backwards. So, stop hating the fk out on a character mate.
Hugo_Adam:why do you have to put itachi on scum che's body and corrupt him with his memories?😝😵😡😠
so, you're telling me that scum che isn't supposed to be a scum but he is one cuz of the author? that the author portrays his characters the way that he feels like and there isn't much we can do. it doesn't matter how he was supposed(realistically) to be, if his actions defined his as a scum that leaves his family behind to go chase that btch(and sooo many other reasons why I hate him as a character and as a person[even if it's a fictional person])then he is still one. Then, maybe, if, the author decided to portray his as a scum, he is supposed to be viewed like one (as author have "cannonisated" him as one). There isn't a "how", they are supposed to be. if you think like this, then you should question why every character is the way they are. But, ultimately, every character, be the "good" or the "bad" ones. are the way they are (or suppose to be, as you say) because the author decided that they should be like that([even Qingyue] since he created them and they belong to him). In the end. Even if realistically, he shouldn't be like that for someone who's supposed to have a past life. he is still like that (a scum).
JustABoxWithAmmo:Haven't really read the original novel. But, It seemed like Yun Che wasn't really that type of a scum. He was more like lost and a avenger, In a way. He pretty much lost his father-like figure (Or was it Grandfather-like figure? Dunno. But he was his teacher, so yeah.) In which he wqs the one who raised him. Yun Che was originally cunning in killing his enemies, and hateful as well. Then when he was reincarnated, He didn't seem like he was supposed to be, I guess? Besides, Their world's laws are different compared to us, in morals as well. Common sense, kinda, But meh. If he was scum for doing sht to that girl and stuff. I'd say that some, or most girls like Xia Quinyue or whatever her name was, Is a litterally the person I wouldn't even bother to be friends, or even want to be near at, at all. Anybody with common sense would rather not talk to her, or even want to be friends in how shtty she is. The way she was potrayed and her actions definitely makes her a btch to me. And wouldn't even bother with this kind of person in my life at all. Anyways... I diverted from the main topic about Yun Che, But it explained my part on Yun Che's reaction being dumb. Actually, When a author potrays the character their personality, morals, actions and intelligence. They then later on makes them dumb in most situations. Like it has no logic at all. So, blame the author itself in how Yun Che acts like when he litterally isn't like that in most parts and etc. And has no development in character. But instead develops backwards. So, stop hating the fk out on a character mate.
First of all, take into the account of how he was described, or shown to be. You cant just go and change your character's personality, nor attitude with just a snap of finger, lmao. So, most of your words are scrapped off. The Author owns him! yes. But in no way was he a scum in how he was described. It's like when you suddenly give a drastic and out of nowhere change to how a character acts. That just doesn't work. Also, I don't think he would just leave his family behind at all. The proof is in his past life. He had no parents, and only a father-figure like to raise him. How one would react to being a parent would make him confused, and not just abandon his family. Besides, Did he know that she pregnant, or she even had a Child at first, at all? From what I have read a little, (Didn't read the chaprer but got glimpses of what the situation seemed like.) He just went away, and didn't take into account of her being pregnant and went away quickly. If you just define a character out of nowhere, When in reality of a logical and rational situation, He wouldn't abandon his family. So, Blame the Author. Yes, I fking said blame the author. So please, at least try to understand how the character is like in the beginning. Also, the body he reincarnated in later on. Did it affect his personality at all? In like, being kinder perhaps? If so, I don't really understand how you reincarnate into a different body and soul. With all of these memories, habits or personality. So yes, "because of author". I don't know if you have ever read a story where the author out of nowhere, makes the Character dumb, Bad temper, different attitude and personality out of nowhere. With no logical explanation that could explain such change. Which would still take some time to affect and it wouldn't be "that" quick.
Hugo_Adam:so, you're telling me that scum che isn't supposed to be a scum but he is one cuz of the author? that the author portrays his characters the way that he feels like and there isn't much we can do. it doesn't matter how he was supposed(realistically) to be, if his actions defined his as a scum that leaves his family behind to go chase that btch(and sooo many other reasons why I hate him as a character and as a person[even if it's a fictional person])then he is still one. Then, maybe, if, the author decided to portray his as a scum, he is supposed to be viewed like one (as author have "cannonisated" him as one). There isn't a "how", they are supposed to be. if you think like this, then you should question why every character is the way they are. But, ultimately, every character, be the "good" or the "bad" ones. are the way they are (or suppose to be, as you say) because the author decided that they should be like that([even Qingyue] since he created them and they belong to him). In the end. Even if realistically, he shouldn't be like that for someone who's supposed to have a past life. he is still like that (a scum).
If you don't understand, long story short. In real life we don't just go full "Imma become super saiyan because I do" stuff. For a better explanation. You cant just change how you act out of nowhere. When this was actually your true person. And you cant change that, please be realistic. As this is mostly why most stories suck on this part. Powers are a bit different. However, for a story to be good. One needs to understand how to do so with this major part. Which is logic in how one acts, And how you cant just change it out of nowhere, When this was how he is originally. Even so, such change takes time to fully change the person at all. I mean, a guy cant just litterally decide that he wants to be gay out of nowhere and say it to his parents, Expecting them to just accept it out of nowhere, That would just be dumb as heck, That I wonder if they even had souls at all, or even a character of how they would even "react".
Hugo_Adam:so, you're telling me that scum che isn't supposed to be a scum but he is one cuz of the author? that the author portrays his characters the way that he feels like and there isn't much we can do. it doesn't matter how he was supposed(realistically) to be, if his actions defined his as a scum that leaves his family behind to go chase that btch(and sooo many other reasons why I hate him as a character and as a person[even if it's a fictional person])then he is still one. Then, maybe, if, the author decided to portray his as a scum, he is supposed to be viewed like one (as author have "cannonisated" him as one). There isn't a "how", they are supposed to be. if you think like this, then you should question why every character is the way they are. But, ultimately, every character, be the "good" or the "bad" ones. are the way they are (or suppose to be, as you say) because the author decided that they should be like that([even Qingyue] since he created them and they belong to him). In the end. Even if realistically, he shouldn't be like that for someone who's supposed to have a past life. he is still like that (a scum).
just like you have explain, Yun che is portrayed to be like that in the beginning. but at some point he just like a man-child who killed people, group and sect without hiding his identity, resulting his family (wife, grandpa, aunt, etc.) and friends to die or in danger repeatedly. the first time its okay maybe you still learning despite your multiple life but even after experiencing it multiple and the MC didn't learn that just mean the MC an idiot who can only solve everything using strength At some point most of his problem always related to woman, which could be avoided if he is not thinking with his third leg. The MC is an idiot, you know clearly that she is using you and yet still trust her and help her even after get backstabbed as for romance the standard trope, MC meet future harem member, the harem member thinks he is cute or interesting, MC getting close with harem member by being shameless, MC protect the girl, girl fall in love In short this MC is not right in his head, never think the consequences of his action (or like do it first, as for future problem i will think later), womanizer, and someone who doesn't deserve the love of his harem member I don't know if he changes in later part of the novel because i stop reading at chapter 1134. I cannot take anymore of his character And I also hate xia qinyue for different reason
JustABoxWithAmmo:Haven't really read the original novel. But, It seemed like Yun Che wasn't really that type of a scum. He was more like lost and a avenger, In a way. He pretty much lost his father-like figure (Or was it Grandfather-like figure? Dunno. But he was his teacher, so yeah.) In which he wqs the one who raised him. Yun Che was originally cunning in killing his enemies, and hateful as well. Then when he was reincarnated, He didn't seem like he was supposed to be, I guess? Besides, Their world's laws are different compared to us, in morals as well. Common sense, kinda, But meh. If he was scum for doing sht to that girl and stuff. I'd say that some, or most girls like Xia Quinyue or whatever her name was, Is a litterally the person I wouldn't even bother to be friends, or even want to be near at, at all. Anybody with common sense would rather not talk to her, or even want to be friends in how shtty she is. The way she was potrayed and her actions definitely makes her a btch to me. And wouldn't even bother with this kind of person in my life at all. Anyways... I diverted from the main topic about Yun Che, But it explained my part on Yun Che's reaction being dumb. Actually, When a author potrays the character their personality, morals, actions and intelligence. They then later on makes them dumb in most situations. Like it has no logic at all. So, blame the author itself in how Yun Che acts like when he litterally isn't like that in most parts and etc. And has no development in character. But instead develops backwards. So, stop hating the fk out on a character mate.