Can he just use his other wishes to redo his pick rather then following what the other person is saying.Atless make him do his own decision rather then being stack with a witch for eternity. The most hatable kind of MC is a Yes man and your MC is one of then so nah I'm out.

The story is like an r34 waifu catalogue story without anything good for the MC so far, he's lazy and he doesn't seem to train or improve whatsoever (unless this is supposed to be a lemon story, in which case he really trained a lot).

The english is great and the story is easily understandable. The actual writing itself is excellent and the author has real talent. However, within the first two chapters i was immediately turned off, first the ‘reaper’ shafts the MC and takes away his companion choice but fair enough Bellatrix Lestrange has the potential to be a hot but violent yandere. Through sheer lazy writing though the author just has the reaper mind **** her so that she is immediately devoted to the MC. I mean she was cleared of all mind manipulation by Voldemort and was able to think for herself for once while sane. Instead of having an actual relationship develop between the two throughout the novel the author just says **** it and kills her personality. Not my style sorry.

If you read, when you read, how he prevented a world war (this is not possible, there are no such stupid military and tererists in the world), you will understand why such a low rating.If you read, when you read, how he prevented a world war (this is not possible, there are no such stupid military and tererists in the world), you will understand why such a low rating.If you read, when you read, how he prevented a world war (this is not possible, there are no such stupid military and tererists in the world), you will understand why such a low rating.If you read, when you read, how he prevented a world war (this is not possible, there are no such stupid military and tererists in the world), you will understand why such a low rating.If you read, when you read, how he prevented a world war (this is not possible, there are no such stupid military and tererists in the world), you will understand why such a low rating.

thanks for the effort author-san 👌👊🙏 moreeeeee moreeeeeee moreeeeee moreeeeeee moreeeeee moreeeeeee moreeeeee moreeeeeee moreeeeee moreeeeeee

Has potential, but the first chapters will turn off nearly all readers from reading more, as our mc is manipulated from the start and basically gets trolled by the wish giver, and mc eats it up, like the beta male he is.

done with this shi t by the beginning of chap 2, got that troll author vibe going. done with this shi t by the beginning of chap 2, got that troll author vibe going.

This story is a textbook example of reversed seㄨism. In MC's kingdom, only women are taught magic. Only women are shown to be captains of ships. Mc's partners - women - are magic-users more powerful than him by the order of magnitude. Social help - only for children and women in a bad situation. Regent of their kingdom - that's right, a woman. Another unpleasant part of the story is kingdom building in GOT world. Usually, one of my favorite genres. Sadly, here all is based on magic. There is no technology uplift, contact with other countries. The MC intentionally chooses the magical route to make his people dependent on him but simultaneously is going to abandon them in a couple of years. Their regent? Yara, a known pirate from canon that was completely ok with pillaging and rąp1ng. At the same time, their kingdom has such strong hiding wards, that without MC's control the pirates will have a perfect base to hide from justice and return to their old ways. They created a foundation for an evil empire and they are just shrugging and saying that it's not their problem. One of the most off-putting parts of the fanfic was romance and the author's f3t1sh for ÑTR. The author looks down on women who didn't sleep with anyone previously. The MC wants his girls well used by other men before he takes them. His chosen partners were previously married or in a relationship. First magic users taught by him - salt-wives - sẹ̀ㄨ slavẹ̀s of iron-borns. The grammar is perfect, almost unseen on this website but it's not enough to offset the serious flaws in plot.

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