I'm sorry but I just can't take it anymore this novel is a cluster f**k of ideas a d sub plots that NEVER go anywhere. the author literally tries to give the MC everything like everything on top of everything and just when you think oh kool is gonna be OP nope he gets his ass kicked and dragged into a bunch of crap honestly I don't even think this a story about the MC I think he just gets dragged around and into crap over and over and over again half it just doesn't even make sense. it's pretty pathetic. this novel has potential but it lacks focus.
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So basically is the MC considered as OP or not?
The technical term for this is Lack of Agency.
if you really read the story, it explains things that were obviously intentionally left unexplained in the boning to reveal a bigger picture later. I thing this actually shows the author has a great imagination and is able to think ahead and not risk through events and circumstances, giving the reader a build up of emotions, disappointments and expectations before allowing a unexpected and satisfying climax to later in the plot instead of a rushed and mediocre telling of a story just like millions already told. just my opinion as an avid reader. 😁
no matter how op he gets, situations occur that make him seem like a hopeless fool for comedy.
No. It just shows that the author seriously screwed up or had no plan at all while writing. One should never assume the reader is imaginative, but rather they are ignorant. On that basis, everything must be explained in a step by step format. Leaving holes in the story breaks the immersion process and is considered at best very poor writing and at worst complete garbage by major publishers. This has nothing to do with future plots, cliffhangers, etc, but out right missing content that the author is REQUIRED to provide.
