Hey , i mean the novel is ok , but nothing special , i was very interested in the first 20 chapters as it didnt seem so -cliche- . after some time it downgraded in quality . There is so many characters that were introduced to not be seen ever again . Around chapter 400-500 there are so many ,,intermission chapters´´ with side characters you know a a thing to zero about. So to end my review - The writing quality - downgrading over time , Stability - there is one [img=recommend] , Story Development - close to none , we just moving about one kingdom for 300/350 chapters and constantly reminded how big the world is , but nothing is shown [img=faceslap], Character Design - Hard to say , but the MC is designed ,,ok´´ but other characters are just 2D sketch of what they should be.
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I 110% remember writing a VERY lengthy comment to this nonsensical review along with a few others but IDK why it's just gone now, so this might be a little late but here it is again. And before I start, I would like to point out that you have not spent a SINGLE coin on the novel (as of 29 March 2021), and you couldn't have used fast passes since your account was created on 3rd Jan 2021 and you left a "review" of up until 500 chapters (which you obviously didn't even read lol) a month later. This means, 1) you read on a pirate site (which is fine, I don't mind, really) but it leads to the second point, 2) the chapters on these pirate sites only go as far as 530ish because those were the OLD outdated chaps since before the novel was contracted the story and characters were somewhat rewritten. You literally read the first draft of the novel on a PIRATED site and had the audacity to leave a review like this, I have to say I'm a little impressed by the shamelessness. Now, to get to the actual points. 1. All of the characters that were introduced to "not be ever seen again" is because the arc relating to them hasn't come to an end yet. They didn't just disappear and MANY of them will keep showing up for a long LONG time. 2. I have no idea WTH you mean by intermission chapters. Every character that was introduced had a REASON to be there and most of them are STILL making appearances at chapter 740+ now so....what? At least read before making such a retarded point. 3. Writing Quality: I am literally a professional copywriter/content writer in a number of a different fields (medical, finance, legal etc). My job and more importantly, my reputation depends on me providing an impeccable service to all my clients so I know for a FACT that there is NOTHING wrong with the writing quality because have spent thousands of dollars hiring me for just that kind of work. There will ofc be typos and some spelling mistakes here and there because I'm only one person doing all this, and say what you want about the story, but the writing quality is better than most professionally translated novels these days, I made sure of that. 4. Story Development: The MC has literally gone to like 4-5 different worlds by the 700th chapter. There is no "reminder" of how big the world is because the dude has visited a greater part of it already (although not in too much depth, that will come later.) 5. Character design: if you think the MC is just OK then I don't even know where to start. But as for some of the other side characters, although I wouldn't say 2D because they each have their own little quirks, their own likes and dislikes and beliefs that make them 'human', I would still like to go into more detail in regards to their personalities. I'm still learning at this point despite all the crap so they too will of course improve. Again, chapters 500-700 are heavily focused on story development and making sense of the whole novel so if you haven't read them then IDK what to say to you.
how dare you
