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Drapetomaniac12
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2020-09-15 00:08

Yay, I'm the first one to review this book. The story is flowing smoothly and it's well written. I'd love to see how the story progresses in the future :) There were a few grammatical errors so I suggest you to proofread the book once. Also, in the start, all of the quotes lack a period at the end. I love the author's notes at the ends. They can brighten anyone's day. Thank you for writing this book ❤️ Keep writing, author!

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Hello everyone, this is your author and I'm here to make some important points clear about this story: 1. The female lead has gone through a lot and the level of her self-confidence is almost zero during the first seventy or eighty chapters. But worry not! She will learn to fight with her demons and will become a very powerful and strong lead as the story will progress. 2. There's no guarantee that you will fall in love with the characters of the brothers immediately. None of the brothers is perfect and they have their own share of past and difficulties. Not all of them will shower the fl, their little sister, in love and warmth from the very beginning. Even though they care about her but it will take time before they will finally appear as the perfect loving and caring brothers. 3. The brothers have a reason for the way they behave towards the fl. Not all their reasons are perfect or sensible reasons but the most important one of them is that they all want to protect their little sister at all cost, even if it means that they will need to be strict with her. 4. This is totally normal that not everyone is going to like this story and I'm completely fine with it. Just make sure to not leave any hate comments. You can always find something better and worthy enough to read. 5. I'll try my best to edit the chapters before uploading them but if you find any silly mistakes, then please kindly point them out. I'll edit them immediately. 6. Your votes, comments, and reviews are more than welcome and so are your suggestions. I hope you guys will enjoy the story! Happy Reading! :)

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