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Ammie_Kinyon
Ammie_KinyonLv153yr
2021-04-20 05:21

Such AMAZING and REALISTIC character development...each main character with his/her own individual complex personalities--past/backstory, strengths, weaknesses, flaws, virtues, vices, secrets, wounds, warts, and all! With every chapter a work of art! I am continually astounded that such a talented young author can still possibly have such a full, deep, even agonizing insight into the "human" condition. . . especially the darkest side of evil where angels fear to tread! As a 51 y/o woman who served in the U.S. Marines, I so relate to the utter, shattered, brokenness of Emily. And returning home to family expecting me to be my "old self"... NOT expecting the screaming night terrors; gut-wrenching fear of cruel, vicious men; loss of my sense of self (don't know who I am anymore...I just know I can NEVER be who I WAS)! I have LOST myself in your exquisite storytelling and blossoming novel! Even shedding renewed hope and inspiration to put the broken, bloody pieces back together in my own life. And perhaps even find love, as well... I could easily savor 10+ chapters every day--but I KNOW the CREATIVE PROCESS is so complex and draining, especially when done diligently. Keep up the spectacular work!!!

The Broken Angel & Her Overprotective Brothers

Nightsummer20
4.8
396 Chs

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Nightsummer20
Nightsummer20Author

Aww, thank you so much, mam. This is such a beautiful review. I can't explain how happy I'm feeling right now. Thank you so much for your love and support. I promise to do my best and not let your hopes down!💜 And I hope that you can find a new life, new love, and new hope to live an amazing life. People around you will surely come to learn and accept the new you with time. You are strong and you can definitely fight through all the bad dreams and memories :) I hope and wish with all my heart that you can learn to love yourself as who you are. Stay healthy and happy 😊❤

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Ammie_Kinyon
Ammie_KinyonLv15

Thank you so kindly, Sweet Nightsummer20! I don't know how old (or young) you are...your profile picture looks so young, intelligent & beautiful... but you seem to also have an "old soul"--or at least a very mature one... Wise beyond your years! Thank you for creating and crafting this brilliant story, and using your magnificent storytelling talents to sweep us away! I look forward to every chapter! And thank you also for your personal words of encouragement and inspiration--how right and wise you are! 💜🥰♥️

Nightsummer20:Aww, thank you so much, mam. This is such a beautiful review. I can't explain how happy I'm feeling right now. Thank you so much for your love and support. I promise to do my best and not let your hopes down!💜 And I hope that you can find a new life, new love, and new hope to live an amazing life. People around you will surely come to learn and accept the new you with time. You are strong and you can definitely fight through all the bad dreams and memories :) I hope and wish with all my heart that you can learn to love yourself as who you are. Stay healthy and happy 😊❤
3yr
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Nightsummer20
Nightsummer20Author

Ammie_Kinyon:Thank you so kindly, Sweet Nightsummer20! I don't know how old (or young) you are...your profile picture looks so young, intelligent & beautiful... but you seem to also have an "old soul"--or at least a very mature one... Wise beyond your years! Thank you for creating and crafting this brilliant story, and using your magnificent storytelling talents to sweep us away! I look forward to every chapter! And thank you also for your personal words of encouragement and inspiration--how right and wise you are! 💜🥰♥️
3yr
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NOgnaras
NOgnarasLv5

Interesting. So far everything is looking good. After reading the plot, it is exactly like the story I've been dreaming of reading. There's not much to go by right now since the story is just starting and barely a day goes by since her coming to the house. I'm really looking forward to how this story is heading. She claimed that she's broken and distrustful of people's nice façade, afraid that all the niceties turn into abuse but after receiving even a little bit of nice treatment from the brothers, she was quick to be all smiles and hopeful. It was a bit contradictory imo. This story has a big potential, I really hope the author will never drop it.

4yr

Nightsummer20
Nightsummer20Author

Hello everyone, this is your author and I'm here to make some important points clear about this story: 1. The female lead has gone through a lot and the level of her self-confidence is almost zero during the first seventy or eighty chapters. But worry not! She will learn to fight with her demons and will become a very powerful and strong lead as the story will progress. 2. There's no guarantee that you will fall in love with the characters of the brothers immediately. None of the brothers is perfect and they have their own share of past and difficulties. Not all of them will shower the fl, their little sister, in love and warmth from the very beginning. Even though they care about her but it will take time before they will finally appear as the perfect loving and caring brothers. 3. The brothers have a reason for the way they behave towards the fl. Not all their reasons are perfect or sensible reasons but the most important one of them is that they all want to protect their little sister at all cost, even if it means that they will need to be strict with her. 4. This is totally normal that not everyone is going to like this story and I'm completely fine with it. Just make sure to not leave any hate comments. You can always find something better and worthy enough to read. 5. I'll try my best to edit the chapters before uploading them but if you find any silly mistakes, then please kindly point them out. I'll edit them immediately. 6. Your votes, comments, and reviews are more than welcome and so are your suggestions. I hope you guys will enjoy the story! Happy Reading! :)

3yr
Silverstar7
Silverstar7Lv3

I'm reading all the stories of this author at the moment and she really is good when it comes to writing a novel. I love her style and the way she builds the story. This book is a little bit different from the other ones based on that this is actually a **** fiction with a touch of the mafia. Unlike her other two stories, there's no hint of fantasy in it. The quotes and author notes are really good and they give you inspiration. I'll probably update this review in the future after reading more chapters and having a good grasp of the story but right now I'm looking forward to dive deeper in it.

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_midnightsunshine_
_midnightsunshine_Lv10

The quality of writing is great and you can actually feel what Emily might be going through. And who wouldn't want to read a story with six male leads? xd I'm curious to see where this story goes. For the first few chapters, nice start. Good luck!

4yr
DaFox_Aholic
DaFox_AholicLv10

This is so good! I'm up to chapter 74 so far. The writing quality is amazing with an interesting plot. Thank you so much author! By far one of the best I'veread on this app[img=recommend]

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gauri_tm
gauri_tmLv2

awesome! !author the story is super addictive to me. I like the plot very much and the characters are quite interesting as well. I just hope you won't leave the storyline and complete the whole novel. I support you👍🏻👍🏻we all do🙃good luck

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Riyah404
Riyah404Lv4

I've read up to chapter twelve. This story feels warm. The author's note at the end of each chapter adds more warmth to the story. Maybe the author could let us peek at the past of Emily with bits of flashbacks so we can see or get a glimpse of how broken she had become. Needs a bit of improvement in grammars. But all in all, I like the warmth in this story. Hope that Emily's brothers can patch up her broken pieces and maybe Emily can do the same for her brothers. They also seem problematic., XD

4yr
MandyBuchner23
MandyBuchner23Lv10

Okay, this book will an emotional roller coaster ride. I can feel it through my bones. So far, i found out what the FL went through but i know that’s just the tip of the iceberg. Im dying of curiosity! I wanna know more and thank you author for releasing this but please update🥺But this novel is really good!🤍🤩

4yr
lone_flower
lone_flowerLv4

I so badly want to read this novel...........❤️❤️❤️.......my one of the favourite genre-overprotective brothers ...... looking forward to reading it

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