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2023-03-01 18:53

So far the novel's absolutely AMAZING! I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT!! unlike a lot of other novels with the tag 'kingdom building' this on actually focuses on it plus this wasn't some really slow paced novel where the Mc would have took 50 chapters to break the siege of his capital and another 150 or so chapters to finally regain control of his kingdom, all in all this is an absolutely fabulous novel with a very smart Mc who is talented in Kingdom building without a system and I hope you won't drop it. Also can you consider increasing the releasing of chapters or mass-releasing chapters?

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Stoicist
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Thank you for the support! I would love to do a mass release, but, unfortunately, my job is taking too much of my time (and also free time x_x) , meaning that I don't have such a huge stack of chapters ready. Sorry!

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Hey there, author here! So, I am going to rate my own story and leave this review for those who might get interested in giving it a try after reding through the synopsis. Also, please, if you are liking this novel leave your review and slowly move your fingers to that little "vote" button (press it!). HUEHUEHUE *evil laugh* - "Thank you! my dear reader!" Writing Quality – First of all, I would like to emphasize that English is not my first language and I have been studying it for five years. So, I might make a few mistakes here and there. However, I am always proofreading and using softwares to improve the writing. Story Development – I don’t think that the story development is going to deviate much from other novels. However, as a reader, I have always been losing myself when an author drifts too apart from a chronological line of events, so I am going to follow as much as possible an established order. I don’t want to write something confusing. Now, talking about the pace of the story, the start is going to be a bit chaotic, due to the situation that the MC finds himself in. However, the future chapters are going to slowly cement a flow. Character Design – I have always loved characters that are rational, self-centered, somewhat arrogant, and confident. Someone who is always planning and thinking how they can get the most of a situation, but still maintains certain values. This is the MC that I am trying to build. As for the other characters, I will be setting them according to the story’s progression. (I don't have but a few important character planned). Updating Stability – Around 2-3 chapters/week. I may exceed that amount if I have enough free time. World Background – It’s a world filled with different species, where all beings can become stronger through Mana. A world that is in the point of “rupture”. I know it’s a common setting, but I will be adding things up as the chapters are updates. However, I plan on doing a good job on that. (I hope) If you have read the synopsis and this review, and liked it, please consider giving this book a try. "Also, don't forget to leave your vote and a review if you liked this work" - The author wrote, with hopeful eyes, waiting for your response. - "Thank you!"

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