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Review Detail of SUBSCRIBE_MY_LIST in Star Wars: Silver Angel

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SUBSCRIBE_MY_LIST
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This is like promising someone to cook them a better meal and then projectile vomiting over the shit meal, then saying, here you go, a better meal! Its a near complete copy of another piece of trash fanfic on this site. With minor changes to make the character an even more passive, submissive, degenerate *** slave wannabe. I dont mind fanfics of fanfics, but if you do it atleast change it drastically enough to make it your own or add on to it. For example, i buy pizzas mozerella pizza in the store, then add my own favorite topings, add bbq sause, oregano, some prosciutto or other type of meat I like, then some dried onions and voila. Thats making a pizza your own. Vomitting over the store bought product is not.

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Star Wars: Silver Angel

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Kinda true... What I found the most disgusting though, was the retarded choices during character creation. Wasting 60% of his talent choosing points, on a skill he could fkn learn... And then opting to take a random disadvantage for some minor benefits... That to me, is where the truly vomitted all over the story...