Review Detail of Khazmylar in Recollection System: Andromeda Saga

Shameless Self Review! I'll remove my review once I get some more reviews. I just wanted to say that I would appreciate it if you gave this novel a chance. I poured a lot into the characters and I think they drive the story more than anything. This is my first novel, but I have a lot of passion for the story and I would really like some feedback to improve my writing. Thanks for taking the time to read!