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Khazmylar

Khazmylar

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Hello everyone! My name is Khaz, I have recently started writing my own novel called "Recollection System: Andromeda Saga" and I hope you can take the time to check it out and give me some feedback!

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  • Khazmylar
    Khazmylar25d
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    That was an incredible arc! Long as he'll, sure, I definitely missed the party but wow this trial was fun. Looking forward to the results!

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  • Khazmylar
    Khazmylar30d
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    UI Shiro incoming

    "What do I think will happen? Let's see… it's going to become very hard to hit her even for powerful queens and gods. The only thing that will limit her then is her body." Nyx grinned. 
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  • Khazmylar
    Khazmylar1mth
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    Shameless Self Review! I'll remove my review once I get some more reviews. I just wanted to say that I would appreciate it if you gave this novel a chance. I poured a lot into the characters and I think they drive the story more than anything. This is my first novel, but I have a lot of passion for the story and I would really like some feedback to improve my writing. Thanks for taking the time to read!

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  • Khazmylar
    Khazmylar1mth
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    Quick! Someone get granny a table!

    Hearing that Shiro had used her divinity for a whole day, Lamira couldn't help but feel lightheaded.
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  • Khazmylar
    Khazmylar1mth
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    if she says 'I suppose' one more time, I am totally calling her Beako.

    "We're not proper 'humans' I suppose for a lack of a better word. We're the chains of this world. We look after this place and guide the humans along. Those that have the qualities of being a hero are raised up personally by us so that they can fight against the Ancient Terror when he wakes up from his slumber. In other words, we are objects and we cannot obtain the power of the gods." Beril replied while merging some liquids together.
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  • Khazmylar
    Khazmylar1mth
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    she has caused weirder situations than this before.

    She could stand on him, hit him and even grab him but his body was semi-transparent. It was a rather strange sight but Shiro dismissed it since she's seen weirder situations before.
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  • Khazmylar
    Khazmylar2mth
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    Time to clench those cheeks!

    Blocking the arrow, Shiro glanced back and saw a shadow version of herself. It was essentially a silhouette but had a pair of glowing red eyes instead.
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  • Khazmylar
    Khazmylar2mth
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    NTS:beat-bet

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  • Khazmylar
    Khazmylar2mth
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    Before anyone asks, yes, Nanomancer reference.

    "Yes ma'am! The anus is an exploitable weakness that's usually unguarded, ma'am!" Ai's voice cracked.
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  • Khazmylar
    Khazmylar2mth
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    or rear.

    Since she couldn't harm his thick skin, the next best choice was going to be the orifices such as the eyes, nose, ears and mouth.
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  • Khazmylar
    Khazmylar2mth
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    RIP minotaur booty.

    "Fine I'll fight you." She took a deep breath and prepared herself for a tough fight. 
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  • Khazmylar
    Khazmylar2mth
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    Thanks again for another incredible set of chapters!

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  • Khazmylar
    Khazmylar2mth
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    Good idea Dimos, when it comes to Shiro, it helps to just not think about it.

    Hearing that Shiro was proficient with quite a few weapons, Dimos just accepted the fact that she could do it. His divinity of wisdom told him that any further thought on the matter would be harmful for his mental state.
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  • Khazmylar
    Khazmylar2mth
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    It worked! Awesome! I have a few more coming out over the next couple days while I work. Enjoy!

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  • Khazmylar
    Khazmylar2mth
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    Equipment: [Agony: Longsword Mode | Evolution Type Weapon | STR Based] This blade is said to house the souls of the Old Ones. Once soulbound, this blade will evolve with its user, unlocking more forms and skills. Can absorb the mana of the user to switch forms and use skills. Current Versions: [Longsword Mode | STR Based] [Rapier Mode | DEX Based] Current Skills: N/A] [Prestige Outfit (Female) 1 Armor]

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  • Khazmylar
    Khazmylar2mth
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    Equipment: Mysterious Sword [E] Unknown Stats Reincarnation Outfit (Female) [E] 1 Armor

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  • Khazmylar
    Khazmylar2mth
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    Thanks for another wonderful read, hope you had a good birthday and I look forward to the next chapter!

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  • Khazmylar
    Khazmylar2mth
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    An incredible read as always. I thought the spirits gathering around was adorable.

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  • Khazmylar
    Khazmylar2mth
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    Happy Birthday Author! My 31st is next week. Lol @ Dimos, finally part of the "wtf Shiro" group!

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  • Khazmylar
    Khazmylar2mth
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    I'm really enjoying this trial so far. The last one kind of gave Shiro a background and Kuromi with nothing else to start with, but this trial really is starting with nothing at all. Thank you for the amazing story!

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