A very interesting story, The story had a very intriguing prologue and is written well. The character of the MC and other side characters are described well. There are minor grammatical errors, but nothing that will prevent you from the smooth experience of a great read. The world seems very interesting, and there is definitely a hook factor. As there are only 3 chapters so far, I can not comment on the other aspects, but it has got great potential. Well done!
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