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priya012
priya012Author4yr
2020-11-19 13:48

Me: "Not a shameless review this time, after all, I am a decent man!" Some readers: "Huh! Aren't you a shameless one? Again five stars." Me: "Hey, don't talk carelessly. I call this confidence!" Some readers: "Confident with your story? Meh. Just another piece of junk in the web novel." Me: "You guys are so mean... This is a good story. So don't judge me so early! *hmph!*." Some readers: "With your writing skill, that is just like that. Tsk" Me: "Hey, Why didn't you read more than 15 chapters? My talents improved afterward." Some good readers: "You're so confident about your story, huh? I'll give it a try." Me: "*sob*sob*You guys are so kind." Some good readers: "So, what's the storyline?" Me: "Let me tell you. This novel tells about the adventures of the main character with his Al( System). Finding the truth about his mysterious dream(A.K.A previous life) and changing his shitty destiny. Furthermore, there is a cold antagonist and OP loyal brother. Tsk *No spoiler*. " So overall, please read this novel up to 15 chapters before thinking about dropping:)(: Definitely, you guys will love the story afterward.

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7_09
7_09Lv13

needed the xp toooooo so here I am

GodlyRuler
GodlyRulerLv4

is this harem?

priya012
priya012Author

No, but he will fall in love with two girls due to previous life circumstances.

GodlyRuler:is this harem?
GodlyRuler
GodlyRulerLv4

thanks

priya012:No, but he will fall in love with two girls due to previous life circumstances.
priya012
priya012Author

"Tsk! They are my colleagues and relative; they just created an account in a web novel to support me and see my work."

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Bryan_Yee
Bryan_YeeLv14

Huh, neat

Arrow_569
Arrow_569Lv4

will their be involvement of aristocrat in story

priya012
priya012Author

Yes

Arrow_569:will their be involvement of aristocrat in story
HanAlister
HanAlisterLv11

I am gonna start reading this after 2 days(exam) but as a fellow indian I am excited to see how you will use our religion. I am already bored of the China is supreme bullcrap so I hope this one is not like that. Best of luck and what will be the release rate?

priya012
priya012Author

Haha, same! I have an exam this week, so I plan to write two chapters a day after the online exam.

HanAlister:I am gonna start reading this after 2 days(exam) but as a fellow indian I am excited to see how you will use our religion. I am already bored of the China is supreme bullcrap so I hope this one is not like that. Best of luck and what will be the release rate?
MadLad69
MadLad69Lv2

Damn it's the first time I read something of Indian origin in WN that too of my fav genre ... kehna padega padh ke accha laga.

priya012
priya012Author

Thanks, brother jab apne pass eta cool characters he or myth h...to kyu na unka use kare story mai

MadLad69:Damn it's the first time I read something of Indian origin in WN that too of my fav genre ... kehna padega padh ke accha laga.
MTFsoldier
MTFsoldierLv10

not bad my guy but also a bit of shameless promotion check out Secure Contain Protect SCP by MTF soldier like please check it

Leon_Luis_
Leon_Luis_Lv4

hey isn't "priya" a female name weird why did your name you A 'Boy'/'Man' a female name

Mr_Omniscient
Mr_OmniscientLv3

i a waiting for more chapter's

Leon_Luis_
Leon_Luis_Lv4

siscon ("totally not judging")

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Leon_Luis_
Leon_Luis_Lv4

lol comments toh del kar diye yeh notification (inbox) toh reh hi gya

priya012
priya012Author

ab kya he bole tumhari soch ko...

Leon_Luis_:lol comments toh del kar diye yeh notification (inbox) toh reh hi gya
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Leon_Luis_
Leon_Luis_Lv4

i know bro i love my family too specially my sister (not in a weird way ok... )

priya012:ab kya he bole tumhari soch ko...
aAakrit
aAakritLv3

I am Indian, but reading this novel made me feel weird, normally every novel I have read has a different culture that I didn't know and could read them with neutral emotional attachment and dive deep into them, but after reading the first 2 ch I was already unable to hold back my laughter. Especially that paratha poem hahahhahaha😂🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

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