Review Detail of tuba_san in My Demon Lord Master

An interesting novel with a plot that exists on the boundary of stuff I've already read and stuff I haven't, which makes it quite unique in a way. I'd recommend people to try out the first five chapters at least before making any decisions. This novel is still starting out so there are many points which will be explored later on but the stuff I've read so far is also nice. Since the author asked for suggestions here are a few from me (but keep in mind these are just my personal opinions and maybe other people might not feel the same): The first chapter is interesting but the change from "Let's kill the demon overlord" to "Lets just sign a peace treaty" is too abrupt for me personally. Especially since there was a fight going on for the majority of the chapter. I'm not sure if reducing the action and adding more discussion would be a good idea. But even without removing anything, more discussion about why the demon lord suddenly wants a peace treaty or the heroes being suspicious of him would definitely be good. The heroes just taking his word for everything seems off to me. The second thing I'd recommend is reviewing your chapters once more. As an author I know just how easy it is to miss typos and errors (I pointed just one out) so all I can do is suggest for you to go through them again. Overall it's very nice, has good potential and I wish the best for you. Keep working hard!