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shaeshangLv23yr
2020-11-18 19:41

Firstly, hat off to the author. This is an interesting story that I've ever read. I'm not into a love story genre but yours is exceptional. It's a fun story. The characters are fun especially the MC. I'm still in chapter 10 but I can't help but write the review because it's so good. Fighting

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Thank you so much for reading and reviewing it. Glad you enjoy it.

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