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Xia_Xia89
Xia_Xia89Lv23yr
2021-02-21 13:35

I read the first few chapters and I have to say your way of writing is unique. I like the way u portrayed the texting style, it's kinda clean to read. It's a nice book with potential and I hope it do well in the future. Full support to u author! [img=recommend][img=recommend]

I hope I never lose you

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Thank you for the review 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡

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Thanks Author for this story. I’m up till chapter 20 but would like to post my review still. 1. Quite a unique writing style to deliver the feelings in the begining on Mason. Conversations that internalised her thoughts and perception of others and how she felt towards cole thereafter. So the ability to draw the characters and thoughts are vividly described through conversations 2. The slow built up of the story is good in terms of how Ly and cole feels about each other and him bringing her back to his place on the first date to know his family - interesting way to let her know him better - good choice. 3. The curiosity and tension when Mason and Ly bumped into Mason in the lift or when Ly had to choose between Cole and trivia in the game leaving Cole feeling left out and him translating that into his actions for her eg holding her hands tighter is portrayed effectively All in all easy read - enjoyed the little things that happen - day in a life surrounding Ly and Cole - look foward to seeing how they will go on from here. Keep up the good work, there are some typo in spacing and punctuations in earlier chapter (small matter that can be corrected) but other than that good read! 👍

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Thank you aryanastan. i have edit some of the symbols and commas in chapter 1 . Hope i won't make any mistake again. It's kinda hard writing because english is not my first language .

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Awesome book!!! Honestly, I love the wittiness of the MC and her fun friends. A relatable and very light read, filled with angst and romantic flops, awesome work Author. Would definitely recommend.

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This is shortcke .Hope you like my book , I'll be updating on daily basis. please enjoy, vote and comment .Its my first book and it means a lot to me.

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An excellent book. The book is just fabulous. Describing it will only undermine your experience. The author is also a very responsive and good person, so this book experience will just be peerless. Love the book author san. Never give up.

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