The plot is interesting from the start ! With the boy’s dreams being affected by something is the main mystery in this case for me. I like how the progression is going, and I don’t have any problems with story development or world background. I see few/ to no errors in the passage, which is a great sign. I’m anticipating more chapters, so keep up the good work author !
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