Item: The Shadow I live With
Rating: 4.6
Author: Lexinor

LexinorLv23yr

2021-05-23 01:10

You can already see from the first few sentences, that is this an amazingly high quality and well-written novel. I honestly have no complaints, wish I did so that I could have more to write about but no, this is just too good for words to even describe. The narrative is perfect, so much so that I'm taking notes on how you manage to narrate while having such a clear description of this world with a build-up of suspense and intrigue. Honestly one of the best horror works I've read, especially on this site.

The Shadow I live With

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