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Review Detail of Pixie_Auri in 3 months

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The story has a nice premise, the main character is well established and relatable. There are a few flow issues, especially with the internal dialogues, but if you push through the book becomes quite interesting.

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3 months

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Thanks a lot!! Yeah, it's my first time writing something like this. So, I had a lot of people giving me pointers and choosing what was best for me took a bit of time.