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Pixie_Auri2yrCommentedCh 2 Character Creation- Pixie_Auri3yrCommentedCh 1 AUTHORS NOTE
- Pixie_Auri3yrCommented
What is it with dead people and their refusal to stay dead??
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This is an interesting story. The characters are well built, and I like that they have layers of personality and are not just bland. I struggled a little with the regional slangs, so this might be a challenging book for non-Nigerian readers. But it's interesting to dive into another culture and learn a bit in the way. Good work!
- Pixie_Auri3yrCommentedCh 3 The Acceptance
- Pixie_Auri3yrCommented
Wow, she's not the best of friends, is she?
Honestly, only a blind man will choose Shade over me. I am more light and with a nice shape, what are you looking for that you can't get? Is it the front or the back? I am well-endowed with these things not to mention my face which looks like the face of a goddess. I am more beautiful and I know this fact. Why would a person who claim to have eyes choose her over me. Shade who is all dark and skinny and dry. I can not imagine to look at her breast without bra, it always looks like a guy's chest. So dry and dried if I am allowed to use that word. How can a guy be so blind and lack good taste? - Pixie_Auri3yrCommented"So, because you think you are cute, you can have any girl you want, f**k anything under skirt? Well, let me burst your bubbles, Why don't you go try to be nice to your mother, d**k s**t!" I shouted.
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I feel like Sigmar is that type of person that absorbs guilt and takes the blame for everything.
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Oh, I'll tell you, it is! You don't want one.
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You might be on to something, Rea!
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lol! I did watch a couple of videos and considered explaining it here, but I feel like we don't need more people with that set of skills.
She opened her traveling costume bag and took out a hair clip, trying to remember the YouTube video she saw the other day about unlocking doors with the thing. It took her way longer than the video suggested, and she had to watch it a few more times to get it done. But soon enough that magnificent click sound was heard and bingo. - Pixie_Auri3yrPosted
The way this book is written is refreshing. I like both the concept and execution. Each chapter got me satisfied with the ending and eager to find out the next stories. My only issue is that some stories could have a bit more detail, just another paragraph or two to allow the reader to get used to the rhythm and flow of the new universe you are introducing us to. Nice job!
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Holy shit, I need to know what happens next!
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I love Luke, I even considered making a book just for him because I love him so much!
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I know right?? I also thought we'd had a minute to breathe but Kiara simply wouldn't behave!
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Pieces on raw emotions as hard, but I think our girl pulled through quite nicely, don't you? S2
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Finally!! I was beginning to think she'd go against everything I plotted!
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You might be on to something ;D
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I fucking love your girls. They are so badass! This fight was epic!
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Holy shit I love Paige. Maybe I shouldn't, but I can't help it.
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