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2021-07-16 14:13

THIS Is art!!!!!!!!! .........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

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First of all... Author, take a ruler, a big one, and measure how many inches or cm are from the base of your waist to your chest.... yeah its a little over 50cm or 20 inches..... and you want your MC to have a 18 inches PêNîs!?!? that's 45 CM CÔCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THats the same size as my whole forearm plus my hand! and I'm 1,74 m tall or 5'7 feet. And you write the girls can take it whole? are you F serious?. If its for comedy... its one thing. But the giris will need to have no organs inside them to take that monster. That just happens in hêntâî LOL. Just give the mc a 10 inch one and be done with it. 10 inches is HUGE anyways. Just so you know, the average vâgînâ length from outside to womb, is 5 inches. Some women are longer, some are shorter. Now about the novel... Well... I will be honest, i didnt liked the mc at all in the first few chapters as he was completely disgusting =P. But that soon changed for the better, so its a huge character development of the mc from a naive and lustful character to a caring and mature character. MC needs to train his techniques better and spend more time training his body since he doesn't needs to waste time cultivating energy like everyone else. So its a huge plus for him to have the time to develop his martial arts (currently as of chapter 53, mc has no martial arts to speak of and he barely knows how to throw a proper punch since most people focus on the ring skills and care little about martial progress, I hope mc can learn how to USE a sword properly under the sword doulou).

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