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DearCompanion
DearCompanionLv44yr
2020-08-30 09:01

Until chap. 4. It's good, mc is a harem-seeking protag. He got a loyal sweetheart. The best part is his co*k is far above average because of his body enhancing spirit talent. So no matter if it was Zhu Zhu Qing or Dugu Yan to Liu Erlong, he could satisfy them all.

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50ShadesOfAss
50ShadesOfAssLv14

Yeah tHe chapters after are bad. MC is competely weak and useless without girls. The girls will seem to get more benefits than the mc when having sEx. His boDy gets stronger and he gains their spirit tool but its still weaker than the girls. He is also no special. Has no battle skills, and is mentally weak af. The worse part is he saves the girl that wouldve been together with his brother, forgetting about him if she wasnt about to be banished for being weak. But i bet MC does not give AF. MC will never be better than his wives. He Cant advance withoUt them and will never be ahead. That simply sucks

DearCompanion
DearCompanionLv4

True, I have been suggesting the author in each chapter's comment after that to give him golden finger of memories of reincarnated old expert so that he has a chance in taking xiao wu from tang san but this author seems like dismissing it but who knows yeah. Regarding that girl, I also suggest the author so that MC not put trust in her and just use her so that he could escape from the village after being strengthened. Just put her at less priority below all his future girls.

DearCompanion
DearCompanionLv4

If this fics really becomes trash, i'll continue my douluo fics which has smart mc. You guys can check that out, it's name if i'm not mistaken is "really trash op mc in animeverse" or trash op mc , i forgot

PassionTaoist
PassionTaoistLv4

almost forgot about that. When will you continue that anyway? and the ATG one too u know the R as Xia Hongyi. its a pity it only has 9 and 6 chapters.

DearCompanion:If this fics really becomes trash, i'll continue my douluo fics which has smart mc. You guys can check that out, it's name if i'm not mistaken is "really trash op mc in animeverse" or trash op mc , i forgot
Venom_God
Venom_GodLv12

Bro i like some of ur work but U always drop it 🤣🤣🤣

DearCompanion:If this fics really becomes trash, i'll continue my douluo fics which has smart mc. You guys can check that out, it's name if i'm not mistaken is "really trash op mc in animeverse" or trash op mc , i forgot
Venom_God
Venom_GodLv12

Thx for the save, sigh

50ShadesOfAss:Yeah tHe chapters after are bad. MC is competely weak and useless without girls. The girls will seem to get more benefits than the mc when having sEx. His boDy gets stronger and he gains their spirit tool but its still weaker than the girls. He is also no special. Has no battle skills, and is mentally weak af. The worse part is he saves the girl that wouldve been together with his brother, forgetting about him if she wasnt about to be banished for being weak. But i bet MC does not give AF. MC will never be better than his wives. He Cant advance withoUt them and will never be ahead. That simply sucks
3PoundsOfRice
3PoundsOfRiceLv5

What kind of story do you want, one where the Mc is indestructible from the start and has no weakness? There are a lot of stories like that, they all have something in common they are all mediocre, they have no development, they are badly written and the protagonist is an arrogant person without a cause. This story is very good, the protagonist has defined weaknesses from the beginning, although at first he may be weak, with time he will become much stronger than any of his girls, since they get only one improvement, but he will get 9. He also gave us a good reason for the Mc to form a harem, he has no choice, if he wants to become strong he needs it. The author didn't rush to increase his crop, instead he turned it into garbage for years and explained it to us in a somewhat logical way, that's called development, it wasn't the best, but it was very good for being a fanfic.

50ShadesOfAss:Yeah tHe chapters after are bad. MC is competely weak and useless without girls. The girls will seem to get more benefits than the mc when having sEx. His boDy gets stronger and he gains their spirit tool but its still weaker than the girls. He is also no special. Has no battle skills, and is mentally weak af. The worse part is he saves the girl that wouldve been together with his brother, forgetting about him if she wasnt about to be banished for being weak. But i bet MC does not give AF. MC will never be better than his wives. He Cant advance withoUt them and will never be ahead. That simply sucks
3RR0R_404
3RR0R_404Lv4

Its not that we want him to be VERY OP, its just that he has no unique power of his own, sure he has 9 spirits but he got it from others which will make other people think he's too dependent on the girls and without them he's useless and you should know how toxic this site is of 'weak' and 'beta' protagonists ._.

3PoundsOfRice:What kind of story do you want, one where the Mc is indestructible from the start and has no weakness? There are a lot of stories like that, they all have something in common they are all mediocre, they have no development, they are badly written and the protagonist is an arrogant person without a cause. This story is very good, the protagonist has defined weaknesses from the beginning, although at first he may be weak, with time he will become much stronger than any of his girls, since they get only one improvement, but he will get 9. He also gave us a good reason for the Mc to form a harem, he has no choice, if he wants to become strong he needs it. The author didn't rush to increase his crop, instead he turned it into garbage for years and explained it to us in a somewhat logical way, that's called development, it wasn't the best, but it was very good for being a fanfic.
DearCompanion
DearCompanionLv4

Yeah, what 3ERROR said is true, the way it is now, unless he surpass tang san rank by at least 30ish rank, he won't be able to defeat tang san and steal xiao wu or zu zu qing as tang san "brother" 's woman.

3PoundsOfRice:What kind of story do you want, one where the Mc is indestructible from the start and has no weakness? There are a lot of stories like that, they all have something in common they are all mediocre, they have no development, they are badly written and the protagonist is an arrogant person without a cause. This story is very good, the protagonist has defined weaknesses from the beginning, although at first he may be weak, with time he will become much stronger than any of his girls, since they get only one improvement, but he will get 9. He also gave us a good reason for the Mc to form a harem, he has no choice, if he wants to become strong he needs it. The author didn't rush to increase his crop, instead he turned it into garbage for years and explained it to us in a somewhat logical way, that's called development, it wasn't the best, but it was very good for being a fanfic.
Demonic_Ogre
Demonic_OgreLv4

ExaltedCrow
ExaltedCrowLv13

Please man... that gif is very disturbing but I can’t look away Send help pls😧

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Daoist21616161
Daoist21616161Lv4

With good reason it is more they should purge that type of MC that I do not know why the hell is so popular. When you think of over-exploited MCs, it's not the OP's but the Betas that win. Most of them are Simp, they don't have self-esteem, they don't have a backbone, they don't grow or mature, they are masochistic (although the author always denied it). Why the hell do people like it?

3RR0R_404:Its not that we want him to be VERY OP, its just that he has no unique power of his own, sure he has 9 spirits but he got it from others which will make other people think he's too dependent on the girls and without them he's useless and you should know how toxic this site is of 'weak' and 'beta' protagonists ._.
Polochampion
PolochampionLv4

Whats the name if the fics

DearCompanion:If this fics really becomes trash, i'll continue my douluo fics which has smart mc. You guys can check that out, it's name if i'm not mistaken is "really trash op mc in animeverse" or trash op mc , i forgot
PUERKO_Senpai
PUERKO_SenpaiLv4

InvalidUN
InvalidUNLv4

I completely agree, sloppy start but becoming slurpy yum

Kutu
KutuLv4

Thank you for your wisdom great one.

50ShadesOfAss:Yeah tHe chapters after are bad. MC is competely weak and useless without girls. The girls will seem to get more benefits than the mc when having sEx. His boDy gets stronger and he gains their spirit tool but its still weaker than the girls. He is also no special. Has no battle skills, and is mentally weak af. The worse part is he saves the girl that wouldve been together with his brother, forgetting about him if she wasnt about to be banished for being weak. But i bet MC does not give AF. MC will never be better than his wives. He Cant advance withoUt them and will never be ahead. That simply sucks
xWhiteShadow
xWhiteShadowLv13

trash author

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EijiSeishuu
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frangky
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TFH
TFHLv6

First of all... Author, take a ruler, a big one, and measure how many inches or cm are from the base of your waist to your chest.... yeah its a little over 50cm or 20 inches..... and you want your MC to have a 18 inches PêNîs!?!? that's 45 CM CÔCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THats the same size as my whole forearm plus my hand! and I'm 1,74 m tall or 5'7 feet. And you write the girls can take it whole? are you F serious?. If its for comedy... its one thing. But the giris will need to have no organs inside them to take that monster. That just happens in hêntâî LOL. Just give the mc a 10 inch one and be done with it. 10 inches is HUGE anyways. Just so you know, the average vâgînâ length from outside to womb, is 5 inches. Some women are longer, some are shorter. Now about the novel... Well... I will be honest, i didnt liked the mc at all in the first few chapters as he was completely disgusting =P. But that soon changed for the better, so its a huge character development of the mc from a naive and lustful character to a caring and mature character. MC needs to train his techniques better and spend more time training his body since he doesn't needs to waste time cultivating energy like everyone else. So its a huge plus for him to have the time to develop his martial arts (currently as of chapter 53, mc has no martial arts to speak of and he barely knows how to throw a proper punch since most people focus on the ring skills and care little about martial progress, I hope mc can learn how to USE a sword properly under the sword doulou).

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