First of all... Author, take a ruler, a big one, and measure how many inches or cm are from the base of your waist to your chest.... yeah its a little over 50cm or 20 inches..... and you want your MC to have a 18 inches PêNîs!?!? that's 45 CM CÔCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THats the same size as my whole forearm plus my hand! and I'm 1,74 m tall or 5'7 feet. And you write the girls can take it whole? are you F serious?. If its for comedy... its one thing. But the giris will need to have no organs inside them to take that monster. That just happens in hêntâî LOL. Just give the mc a 10 inch one and be done with it. 10 inches is HUGE anyways. Just so you know, the average vâgînâ length from outside to womb, is 5 inches. Some women are longer, some are shorter. Now about the novel... Well... I will be honest, i didnt liked the mc at all in the first few chapters as he was completely disgusting =P. But that soon changed for the better, so its a huge character development of the mc from a naive and lustful character to a caring and mature character. MC needs to train his techniques better and spend more time training his body since he doesn't needs to waste time cultivating energy like everyone else. So its a huge plus for him to have the time to develop his martial arts (currently as of chapter 53, mc has no martial arts to speak of and he barely knows how to throw a proper punch since most people focus on the ring skills and care little about martial progress, I hope mc can learn how to USE a sword properly under the sword doulou).
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Meijing is already learning from the Sword Douluo and would show her progress and new style. But while Meijing's path is the sword, I want for Haotian to follow another one, different from her. About teachers, I can't think any other until he is past rank 70 that would be to learn the late technique, so I suppose that until that he would improve his control and make his own style.
You dont need to restric yourself to find an existing character. You can make up a lvl 70 or so old dude with a long beard, call it shifu, who had body spirit with restricted abilities that can only be used to increase the body abilities, meaning, no super powers like elements manipulation. Making them spirit master who are 100% restricted to close quarter combat. Thus forcing them to learn martial arts of all kinds to survive and they can take you out with their body alone..... etc.. these dudes are also frowen upon like blacksmiths. So they share a good relationship between them as the blacksmith make the best possible weapons for them. If the target is flying? Take it down with a strong rope+metal claw to get it close and beat the crâp out of them. You know. A body cultivator. And have mc meet them and train under them for a few years?....... i also forgot to applaud yiu for mc learning the heart control skill of the ffamily of rongrong.
I read up to Academy chapter when the novel released but after I've to stop it cuz I think in MC harem, xiao wu won't there. whenever I read a fanfiction MC always leave her and became Protagonist brother. It's pain me a lot for that fear I stopped this. So I want to ask is she going to be in harem.
It might change, but Xiao Wu most probably won't be part of the harem. I can't think of adding her with sense and without forcing it too much. On the other hand, I can already say that he won't be Tang San's brother. He would start like foreigners and would become worse later on
