Review Detail of 50ShadesOfAss in My Succubus System

Which tag would you recommend exactly? Also, there was never any indication that this wouldn't happen, that was just assumption on the part of readers honestly. The MC is a woman. Would you have an issue if the character was a man having sex with a woman? I sincerely doubt it. Thus I'm not really sure where all the strongly worded reaction comes from but-- this post was specifically made so that people who feel the way you do are aware. You now have the option to enjoy the story, or find something a little more to your tastes.

Also to answer your other question, the "point" was simply that he lived his past life as a man and how had the body of a woman. That allows the reader to experience some unique insights based on his unique perspective of having the mind of a former man while dealing with a plethora of sexual situations. Once again, I STRONGLY suggest that if you are turned off by any of the aspects of this story, please-- just don't read it. I have absolutely 0 intentions of changing any of my plans as to the general story for this concept regarding who the MC sleeps with at this point in time. I feel it serves to do little else but detract from the story.

Stories that have a man turning into a woman are most likely Futa or Yuri. So of course You not putting it in the tags that the mc is Bi , or leave a note that the mc will fUck dudes would confuse new readers.

I added a Gender-Bender tag to the story. It seemed more fitting. Yuri = male on male, Futa= chicks with d*cks, the MC doesn't fall into either of those categories.

my dissapointment is immesurable and my day is ruined. add Bi-sexual tag and MC Bashing tag, or something to indicate you will abuse your MC all the time... its not fair to people, when they read yuri action for 20 chaps, get acccuainted with a character and then out of nowhere you abuse and rape your cute MC, making people who was enjoying reading ero novel suddenly feel abused and sad. pls tag it with some Abuse MC tag or something...

also yuri is female+female. male+male is yaoi. add some beta mc tag, or write in sino**is about having sex with everyone and being a slut, or just slut mc tag

there are also novels with bullying and submission tags, do something like that

Yuri is Girl on girl

Oh, okay- my mistake thanks for clearing that up. My main concern is that adding a ton of tags will sort of water down the purpose of clearly classifying my story. I'd rather keep it with a few that fit the overall theme of the story rather than end up with 20-30. This story at it's core isn't yuri focused, which is "girls love". The story isn't about girls love. The main focus is the succubus, the system and adventuring. There are tons of tags that *could* be added, but they play minor roles imo which is why I felt it was better not to even add them. Even with the Gender bending tag I just added, it's mentioned from the very beginning of the story and all throughout that this is a woman who used to be a man in a past life. For all intents and purposes, the only thing manly about her are her mannerisms and thoughts at time. It's a persistent point of character development, but it's nowhere near as important a factor as people are making it out to be, honestly. As the author though, I think I have a unique perspective that helps me more to understand what I'm going for. Time will tell!

Knowing my plans for the story I just don't believe that's necessary Sacred. It's *just* 20 chapters into the story. Less than 100,000 words which isn't even 1/5th of the progress in most novels. Are people really this upset that the main character had the *audacity* to lie on her back for 1 sex scene? I think maybe some perspective is in order..

That being said, as I've stated-- I have 0 plans to add a tag for every single nuance of the story which shall be written in. The story would easily have over 30 tags associated with it. I'd rather focus on the tags most relevant to the story. You can feel free to judge it on your own ideas about what a succubus is, but the reality is the MC has been in the world for 3 days at this point. I think it's a little strange to impatiently insist that the MC turns into a full blown succubus within 72 hours who dominates everything and everyone. At least that's my opinion....

That would be applicable-- *if* this novel was about the MC being bullied or submissive (or any of the other tags people keep suggesting I add) as a general rule. It's not. It's about a succubus who indulges in sex-u-al encounters of all types as she adventures in a new world. The MC is level 7 out of 999. She has several ranks she has yet to acquire, over 20 powers to choose from and a lot of ground to cover. (And most of which you haven't even been exposed to--yet). Most of your points are perceptions and inferences. Unfortunately, I can't really address an issue that seems to be based on how you view something as opposed to how they may actually be. BUT, if a MC being screwed over occasionally bothers you that much (I don't seem to remember anyone having an issue when Abeni was the one pinned down...), I would, once again STRONGLY suggest that you find something to read that you enjoy. Rise of The Shield Hero is an example of a character who constantly gets screwed over, and through his own power he comes to be a great character. The MC won't be on that level, but bad things can and will happen. It's not my intention to sour anyone's experience, however this story is what it is--I have a specific vision for the character's growth, and I believe it's worth it to follow it through based on my original plans. If it truly bothers you enough that you'd want to leave the story -- once again I understand.

hey author i clearly went to male protagonist option and i found this story, why? pls put your gender bent tag in this.. and pls take it off the male mc option of the ranking... thanks for understanding..

She only have a vague memory about been male and she is a Succubus. Expect a Succubus to have also fun with men. It is in the instinct.

Dude I agree so hard. The only reason I could see for making the MC male at first is if the author is a female or author is actually gay but doesn’t dare to say so. Should have just been a girl that reincarnated instead

disgusting. MC even gets raped? jeesus crist, thank god for reviews. May this novel and author burn in hell.

Actually, male-to-female gender-bend stories aren't necessarily Yuri/Futa stories. Rule of Thumb is that if Yuri/Gl/Futa is not in the tags, it will most likely be female x male. It his particular case you would be nuts to not expect a succubus to do it with a male since they are supposed to be perfect traps form males as they need their essence or whatever it is any given story. Though adding BI would have removed that doubt for some.

I’ve jusg caught up to the story at this point so chapter 75-sh and i don’t really see any rape in it. I saw in chapter 20 that whole group thing but the MC could have stopped it at any point that she wanted as was mentioned in the story. Could you please explain why you think that this is rape? I may just not understand what would be classified as rape.

I don't think there's much explanation. I think those people just have an issue with Abeni hatred, to be honest. They dislike Abeni as a character and are projecting. The reality is Agni actually did pounce on someone just a few chapters prior and no one batted an eye..