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sacredsan20dCommentedThen Everything Changed When the Fire Nation Attacked
"Their sibling dynamic is certainly entertaining to watch," Piandao finally said after the short silence. "And from what I can see, it already seems as if he's part of your family. This may just be my opinion, but I think Nathan will be staying for the foreseeable future."- sacredsan1mthCommented
forget the scedule, write for fun, a good story will find its readers.
I will try to get the next one out by Wednesday. - sacredsan2mthReplied to A_Real_Werewolf234
sure no problem
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so maybe use Valeria, and short can be Ria or V or Val
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Male is Valeriy, short Valera. And female is Valeriya or Valeria with short being Lera usually. There is a meme where a funny drug addict calls his revolver Valera, and tells everyone that Valera will fix all his problems. goes something like "Valera, your time has come" and pulls it from a glovebox. Every time i read this name i imagine that youtube character :D
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then ask jarvis to translate runes on golden chains and house
Of course, this would be done after translating the books from Japanese to Terrarian or, even better, asking Jarvis to translate after he learned the language of Terraria. - sacredsan5mthCommented
Author-kun. Your story is nice, and i hope you dont listen to hatefull people. Some people will write constructive criticism, and some are just spiteful. Keep your own pace, write what you want, and have fun! I like your take on characters, i like the possibility of time anchoring to escape time travel fillers, and i like your writing style! Good luck 👍
Ch 24 The monster: Doomsday - sacredsan6mthCommented
been few weeks, and i forgot who is Fido, and how other summons look. can you please make aux chap with names (maybe sources) and images? i love your book, dont be upset about me, my memory is like a sieve :D
The moment my feet had touched down on the grimy, grey dirt ground of the Necropolis I summoned my entire army without hesitation as dozens of Skeleton Demons, Death Knights and several Archers lined up behind me with Fido, Alpha and Wiz by my side. - sacredsan7mthCommentedBut she didn't use her powers, her sword skills that I taught, to take my life. Instead, she tied me up and ravaged me. She broke the code of the hermit that she knew would kill me.
- sacredsan1yrCommented
didnt answer about not harming them. shouldve asked "what did dionysus tell you to achieve in our family"
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do not do chest compressions if they have a pulse... google says If there is no pulse or breathing within 10 seconds, begin chest compressions. Start CPR with 30 chest compressions before giving two rescue breaths.
"Next, check if they are breathing. This shouldn't take more than ten seconds. After that, you start chest compressions. Place your hand on your chest plate. Go down and locate where the bone ends. Two fingers above that point, place your dominant hand and clasp your other hand over it. Then, you push while counting to thirty in fifteen seconds. After that, you give mouth-to-mouth breathing, or, resuscitation in technical terms." - sacredsan1yrPosted
Good read. Finally something fresh. After a hundred boring copypasted books with simping main characters, overcomplicated unnecessary systems and unchanged plots, i have hope. I wish the author all the health and confidence, write your creation how you see it, and let hundreds of silent fans appreciate it. I hope more people notice stupid reviews, and decide to write out their feelings how i did. Good luck and happy holidays <3
- sacredsan1yrCommentedI also have other plans for Jake which you'll see in 7 or 8 more chapters.
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its been like 30 years since grey-white-green-blue and then purple red gold or some other stuff, why changing gren and blue places? it breaks immersion somewhat cause i notice this choice of yours
From lowest to highest rarity, the gacha colors were White, Blue, Green, Red, then Gold. - sacredsan1yrCommented
much better than re-reading last chapter. Since they are so big (thank you btw <3) i just fast read previous chapter before reading new one, and this takes away from immersion.
(A.N.: So, I read some people talk about how they forget the plot. So I have this idea of a recap. Should I continue or nah?) - sacredsan1yrCommented
In general there are fanfics that build on the idea of commenters moving plot, usually they die early. I don't understand how authors of this website get so submissive to coments, that tey stop writing, or abandon the passion they had when they started writing. Comments are for readers. You are an author, so write your book and let the silent majority of readers enjoy your fantasy. Be strong.
Ch 28 Note - sacredsan1yrReplied to TotherWindow1
i actually thought he decided on other option, and forgone the cars...
When Ekko made it to the garage, the car he chose to drive was the Pagani huayra, a very beautiful car. - sacredsan1yrCommented
isnt her hands kinda... i guess not that soft?
Rebecca's eyes lit up like stars as she pulled him again, kissing him deeper and more passionately, her fingers wiggling deviously as she started to reach for his crotch, pleasantly surprised at it's size through his pants, before she straight up shoved her hand down into his pants, noting that it was in fact all organic.