Review Detail of NikTitanik866 in Man Made Demon
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This was disappointing. In light of the writing quality, I thought the story would also be up to par, however, the reality is different. The story is very fast-paced which along with the lack of worldbuilding makes the experience rather lacklustre. The characters are also very random with extreme polarity, aka bad guys are bad because they are bad and the good guys follow the same logic. The MC is also an edge lord. Sure, he went through a lot of shit, but it is nowhere as horrifying as he makes it out to be. My advice to the author would be to slow down, actually make me give a damn about the characters and start describing the MC's path more thoroughly.
Man Made Demon
Jay_Synergy
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I completely agree with your points which is why I dropped the story, and thank you for taking the time to give constructive criticism. I have plans for another story soon and plan to use all I have learned from experience, reviews, and comments in order to make it a much better story than this one was.
Ay, no problem. I really hope you succeed. Best of luck. Also, once you do start the new story, I promise to give it a read.
Jay_Synergy:I completely agree with your points which is why I dropped the story, and thank you for taking the time to give constructive criticism. I have plans for another story soon and plan to use all I have learned from experience, reviews, and comments in order to make it a much better story than this one was.