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shawnr
shawnrLv143yrshawnr

1 star yes 1 star because in the description of the novel that he was part of a scheme that doesn't end well and as the story begin the synopsis is put as a future event and I don't like that the future of the MC is already decided.

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The Soul Keeper

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Aschirg
AschirgLv5Aschirg

thx I also hade novels that foreshadow or have traveling back in time to do doovers

Auxut
AuxutLv1Auxut

you don't even know what happens after that point, with this mindset you can't I even read or watch anything, maybe it is just a vision, maybe all of this just a loop that has to be broken, maybe it is just a dream? giving 1 star for that is just ridiculous dick move

shawnr
shawnrLv14shawnr

I don't know bro I just don't like knowing in advance what's gonna happen to the MC It just kinda spoiled it for me

Auxut:you don't even know what happens after that point, with this mindset you can't I even read or watch anything, maybe it is just a vision, maybe all of this just a loop that has to be broken, maybe it is just a dream? giving 1 star for that is just ridiculous dick move
Auxut
AuxutLv1Auxut

But this is not a review tho, you should consider world building, character design and all the story elements used. I know it can be frustrating to see something you don't wanna happen, this does not means it is a terrible book, I think it has really good character backgrounds and world building, also story's language is pretty good too, I'm excited to see what's gonna happen next, my point is ,even in Dune you know what's gonna happen Paul sees everything from start but you wanna see how Paul gonna achieve those things and how surpasses himself and his destiny! if you drop dune for same reason you probably miss a masterpiece. My argument is not just for this book :)

shawnr
shawnrLv14shawnr

You do you bro I just say what I feel like I like to say I'm a simple reader I don't give a crap about all the details. if I don't like a story and you like it don't go preaching it to me just review more 5 star to counteract my 1 star. it's just to me it could've been an enjoyable story to read but just because of the synopsis it ruined it for me no matter how good the character building is or no matter how good the story is. Just that I just want the author to know that it could have been a good story but just because of some spoiler synopsis it ruined it for me. So the 1 star so stop preaching and just accept the fact that I gave a novel a 1 star jast cause of a spoiler synopsis

Auxut:But this is not a review tho, you should consider world building, character design and all the story elements used. I know it can be frustrating to see something you don't wanna happen, this does not means it is a terrible book, I think it has really good character backgrounds and world building, also story's language is pretty good too, I'm excited to see what's gonna happen next, my point is ,even in Dune you know what's gonna happen Paul sees everything from start but you wanna see how Paul gonna achieve those things and how surpasses himself and his destiny! if you drop dune for same reason you probably miss a masterpiece. My argument is not just for this book :)
shawnr
shawnrLv14shawnr

You do you bro I just say what I feel like I like to say I'm a simple reader I don't give a crap about all the details. if I don't like a story and you like it don't go preaching it to me just review more 5 star to counteract my 1 star. it's just to me it could've been an enjoyable story to read but just because of the synopsis it ruined it for me no matter how good the character building is or no matter how good the story is. Just that I just want the author to know that it could have been a good story but just because of some spoiler synopsis it ruined it for me. So the 1 star so stop preaching and just accept the fact that I gave a novel a 1 star jast cause of a spoiler synopsis

Auxut:But this is not a review tho, you should consider world building, character design and all the story elements used. I know it can be frustrating to see something you don't wanna happen, this does not means it is a terrible book, I think it has really good character backgrounds and world building, also story's language is pretty good too, I'm excited to see what's gonna happen next, my point is ,even in Dune you know what's gonna happen Paul sees everything from start but you wanna see how Paul gonna achieve those things and how surpasses himself and his destiny! if you drop dune for same reason you probably miss a masterpiece. My argument is not just for this book :)
Auxut
AuxutLv1Auxut

Dont get me wrong im not trying to change your review or something, you can give 1 star ofcourse, who I'm I to judge your taste. I'm just just trying to show a different perspective an angle, like I said my point is not only for this book.

DaoistHaIfXb
DaoistHaIfXbLv1DaoistHaIfXb

Very idiotic review. "dOn't LikE ThaT mC's FuTurE iS dEcidEd" Watch or read something like Sherlock Holmes where they first show us the future and then give them a 1 star and see if anyone takes you seriously, it's just a storytelling choice that doesn't take away from its quality.

shawnr
shawnrLv14shawnr

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DaoistHaIfXb:Very idiotic review. "dOn't LikE ThaT mC's FuTurE iS dEcidEd" Watch or read something like Sherlock Holmes where they first show us the future and then give them a 1 star and see if anyone takes you seriously, it's just a storytelling choice that doesn't take away from its quality.
Novel_Equilizer
Novel_EquilizerLv14Novel_Equilizer

@shawnr Retard

Benjamin_
Benjamin_Lv3Benjamin_

thx for this review. I don't wanna read a novel where the mc is gonna pine for other people to the point he's more than happy to be used and killed by them.

Earthshaker34
Earthshaker34Lv6Earthshaker34

you look like a dick and an asshole to me, But I am not going to treat you like one because that might not be the case.

shawnr:I don't know bro I just don't like knowing in advance what's gonna happen to the MC It just kinda spoiled it for me
DarkDragonGoddess
DarkDragonGoddessLv6DarkDragonGoddess

Thank you for telling me. i feel the same way about stories that spoil the ending/future in the summary or prologue

Godack
GodackLv2Godack

I dunno man, every novel ends up the same, either they become extremely overpowerd, get an unnecessarily sized harem, die and get reborn or some other weird shit. You should know this and yet you complain about the future being spoild? I think this is just wishful thinking from your part.

Magn0lia
Magn0liaLv13Magn0lia

Are you dumb? You gave it a 1 star because of one thing. You didnt even consider the other factors.

Daoist_Red_Reads
Daoist_Red_ReadsLv4Daoist_Red_Reads

Right-back at ya

Novel_Equilizer:@shawnr Retard
Daoist_Red_Reads
Daoist_Red_ReadsLv4Daoist_Red_Reads

I mean he reviewed it not with the intent of a great reviewer but more on what he felt. Many people in this comment section are idiots for calling him one. After all many people dont even leave a review and give it 5 stars yet they don't question it.

DarkMist
DarkMistLv12DarkMist

True, 👍.

Daoist_Red_Reads:I mean he reviewed it not with the intent of a great reviewer but more on what he felt. Many people in this comment section are idiots for calling him one. After all many people dont even leave a review and give it 5 stars yet they don't question it.
Daoist_Red_Reads
Daoist_Red_ReadsLv4Daoist_Red_Reads

What I do not like about this novel is that it reveals too much in the synopsis. The synopsis could have just said he was betrayed by someone cause wow did the novel do good by placing characters who looked like they would betray him in the future. Just the lady and man who helped him fit the description of the synopsis and his friends are really nice. Sadly the author put too much detail on who would betray him ruining the mystery for me. Good novel but it has a shitty synopsis that spoils too much, I only call it shitty because it spoils too much but if it did not then it would be a great synopsis.

Daoist_Red_Reads
Daoist_Red_ReadsLv4Daoist_Red_Reads

When I read the novel I forgot about the synopsis. It is a great novel with great characters and world-building and mystery. I know he is going to be betrayed but forgot who would. Then comments pointed out the obvious cause they read the synopsis. It prompted me to read the synopsis aaaaanddd it killed the mystery for me. It also killed all that great character development and characters cause I know who is bad or not. The author made the story great at hiding who is the traitor but the synopsis is that annoying guy who spoils you about your favorite story ruining the experience. Tl;dr the novel gave his betrayal a sense of mystery on who is going to betray him. It made the characters conflicting, one is evil but helps him. So you have to think without knowing the obvious. The synopsis killed it, it killed the characters and how the adventure is unfolding. As long as the author removed who is going to betray him then it will bring to the story a great service.

Godack:I dunno man, every novel ends up the same, either they become extremely overpowerd, get an unnecessarily sized harem, die and get reborn or some other weird shit. You should know this and yet you complain about the future being spoild? I think this is just wishful thinking from your part.