Item: The Soul Keeper
Rating: 1

shawnrLv144yr

2020-09-29 12:10

1 star yes 1 star because in the description of the novel that he was part of a scheme that doesn't end well and as the story begin the synopsis is put as a future event and I don't like that the future of the MC is already decided.

The Soul Keeper

Dweia

4.1

341 Chs

Liked by 25 people

Replies22

AuxutLv1

you don't even know what happens after that point, with this mindset you can't I even read or watch anything, maybe it is just a vision, maybe all of this just a loop that has to be broken, maybe it is just a dream? giving 1 star for that is just ridiculous dick move

4yr

shawnrLv14

I don't know bro I just don't like knowing in advance what's gonna happen to the MC It just kinda spoiled it for me

Auxut:you don't even know what happens after that point, with this mindset you can't I even read or watch anything, maybe it is just a vision, maybe all of this just a loop that has to be broken, maybe it is just a dream? giving 1 star for that is just ridiculous dick move

4yr

AuxutLv1

But this is not a review tho, you should consider world building, character design and all the story elements used. I know it can be frustrating to see something you don't wanna happen, this does not means it is a terrible book, I think it has really good character backgrounds and world building, also story's language is pretty good too, I'm excited to see what's gonna happen next, my point is ,even in Dune you know what's gonna happen Paul sees everything from start but you wanna see how Paul gonna achieve those things and how surpasses himself and his destiny! if you drop dune for same reason you probably miss a masterpiece. My argument is not just for this book :)

4yr

shawnrLv14

You do you bro I just say what I feel like I like to say I'm a simple reader I don't give a crap about all the details. if I don't like a story and you like it don't go preaching it to me just review more 5 star to counteract my 1 star. it's just to me it could've been an enjoyable story to read but just because of the synopsis it ruined it for me no matter how good the character building is or no matter how good the story is. Just that I just want the author to know that it could have been a good story but just because of some spoiler synopsis it ruined it for me. So the 1 star so stop preaching and just accept the fact that I gave a novel a 1 star jast cause of a spoiler synopsis

Auxut:But this is not a review tho, you should consider world building, character design and all the story elements used. I know it can be frustrating to see something you don't wanna happen, this does not means it is a terrible book, I think it has really good character backgrounds and world building, also story's language is pretty good too, I'm excited to see what's gonna happen next, my point is ,even in Dune you know what's gonna happen Paul sees everything from start but you wanna see how Paul gonna achieve those things and how surpasses himself and his destiny! if you drop dune for same reason you probably miss a masterpiece. My argument is not just for this book :)

4yr

shawnrLv14

Auxut:But this is not a review tho, you should consider world building, character design and all the story elements used. I know it can be frustrating to see something you don't wanna happen, this does not means it is a terrible book, I think it has really good character backgrounds and world building, also story's language is pretty good too, I'm excited to see what's gonna happen next, my point is ,even in Dune you know what's gonna happen Paul sees everything from start but you wanna see how Paul gonna achieve those things and how surpasses himself and his destiny! if you drop dune for same reason you probably miss a masterpiece. My argument is not just for this book :)

4yr

AuxutLv1

Dont get me wrong im not trying to change your review or something, you can give 1 star ofcourse, who I'm I to judge your taste. I'm just just trying to show a different perspective an angle, like I said my point is not only for this book.

4yr

DaoistHaIfXbLv1

Very idiotic review. "dOn't LikE ThaT mC's FuTurE iS dEcidEd" Watch or read something like Sherlock Holmes where they first show us the future and then give them a 1 star and see if anyone takes you seriously, it's just a storytelling choice that doesn't take away from its quality.

4yr

shawnrLv14

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DaoistHaIfXb:Very idiotic review. "dOn't LikE ThaT mC's FuTurE iS dEcidEd" Watch or read something like Sherlock Holmes where they first show us the future and then give them a 1 star and see if anyone takes you seriously, it's just a storytelling choice that doesn't take away from its quality.

4yr

Novel_EquilizerLv14

@shawnr Retard

4yr

Benjamin_Lv10

thx for this review. I don't wanna read a novel where the mc is gonna pine for other people to the point he's more than happy to be used and killed by them.

4yr

Earthshaker34Lv6

you look like a dick and an asshole to me, But I am not going to treat you like one because that might not be the case.

shawnr:I don't know bro I just don't like knowing in advance what's gonna happen to the MC It just kinda spoiled it for me

4yr

DarkDragonGoddessLv6

Thank you for telling me. i feel the same way about stories that spoil the ending/future in the summary or prologue

4yr

GodackLv2

I dunno man, every novel ends up the same, either they become extremely overpowerd, get an unnecessarily sized harem, die and get reborn or some other weird shit. You should know this and yet you complain about the future being spoild? I think this is just wishful thinking from your part.

3yr

Magn0liaLv13

Are you dumb? You gave it a 1 star because of one thing. You didnt even consider the other factors.

3yr

Daoist_Red_ReadsLv4

Right-back at ya

Novel_Equilizer:@shawnr Retard

3yr

Daoist_Red_ReadsLv4

I mean he reviewed it not with the intent of a great reviewer but more on what he felt. Many people in this comment section are idiots for calling him one. After all many people dont even leave a review and give it 5 stars yet they don't question it.

3yr

DarkMistLv13

True, 👍.

Daoist_Red_Reads:I mean he reviewed it not with the intent of a great reviewer but more on what he felt. Many people in this comment section are idiots for calling him one. After all many people dont even leave a review and give it 5 stars yet they don't question it.

3yr

Daoist_Red_ReadsLv4

What I do not like about this novel is that it reveals too much in the synopsis. The synopsis could have just said he was betrayed by someone cause wow did the novel do good by placing characters who looked like they would betray him in the future. Just the lady and man who helped him fit the description of the synopsis and his friends are really nice. Sadly the author put too much detail on who would betray him ruining the mystery for me. Good novel but it has a shitty synopsis that spoils too much, I only call it shitty because it spoils too much but if it did not then it would be a great synopsis.

3yr

Daoist_Red_ReadsLv4

When I read the novel I forgot about the synopsis. It is a great novel with great characters and world-building and mystery. I know he is going to be betrayed but forgot who would. Then comments pointed out the obvious cause they read the synopsis. It prompted me to read the synopsis aaaaanddd it killed the mystery for me. It also killed all that great character development and characters cause I know who is bad or not. The author made the story great at hiding who is the traitor but the synopsis is that annoying guy who spoils you about your favorite story ruining the experience. Tl;dr the novel gave his betrayal a sense of mystery on who is going to betray him. It made the characters conflicting, one is evil but helps him. So you have to think without knowing the obvious. The synopsis killed it, it killed the characters and how the adventure is unfolding. As long as the author removed who is going to betray him then it will bring to the story a great service.

Godack:I dunno man, every novel ends up the same, either they become extremely overpowerd, get an unnecessarily sized harem, die and get reborn or some other weird shit. You should know this and yet you complain about the future being spoild? I think this is just wishful thinking from your part.

3yr

AschirgLv5

thx I also hade novels that foreshadow or have traveling back in time to do doovers

3yr

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