Novel_Equilizer

Again he talks to much. Just take the books you need on the first subject and fk off.

I’m liking the story to follow it every day but there is one thing that peeves me a lot. The MC just can’t keep his mouth shut. He gives every detail to every new stranger he meets. Either that Argonian wizard or this new person. He didn’t need to mention how he created his body or that he ment a daedric prince the instant they met. This is just some examples. Also I don’t know if this is just the writing style, but the expose or world building in the form of his thoughts just creates a word block and takes up most of the chapter. Like we didn’t need 1-2 chapters to know his thoughts on the volcano.

Bro with all of his advantages, he is just equal to Sasha?! That too at the age of 15 when she probably started later. He should just give up at this point.

Why the slow updates?

Can you explain the race format a bit? I don’t understand the heats. How many stages and no. of races in total? What leads to the final qualifying position?

lol really. I couldn’t believe it.

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