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Hunter_Valcarce
Hunter_ValcarceLv41yr
2024-03-17 08:28

pretty good wishes it more chapters coming out that's the only negative part

Reworking/ rewriting

Iros
3.9
79 Chs

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Iros
IrosAuthor

yeah, it was dumb of me to be working on three books

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Ozonelayer
OzonelayerLv14

Lol 😂, I know your pain all too well😅

Iros:yeah, it was dumb of me to be working on three books
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Desire96
Desire96Lv4

Ik the feeling, there’s always a conflict between what you want to write and what readers want to read , the balance is hard to find 😭. Anyway, can I read this fic without having any knowledge on Skyrim ?

Iros:yeah, it was dumb of me to be working on three books
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Desire96
Desire96Lv4

Ayo, dude you are ancient, how is being author this long feels? Give some tips to this ignorant junior

Ozonelayer:Lol 😂, I know your pain all too well😅
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Iros
IrosAuthor

yeah, though this is by far the worst one, for Grammer and such. as it was my first fanfic.

Desire96:Ik the feeling, there’s always a conflict between what you want to write and what readers want to read , the balance is hard to find 😭. Anyway, can I read this fic without having any knowledge on Skyrim ?
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Iros
IrosAuthor

damn my feelings.

Desire96:Ayo, dude you are ancient, how is being author this long feels? Give some tips to this ignorant junior
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Desire96
Desire96Lv4

I-I can explain…

Iros:damn my feelings.
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Desire96
Desire96Lv4

Hmm, makes sense, Evem my first one is not readable by normal peeps other than super humans who could decipher it

Iros:yeah, though this is by far the worst one, for Grammer and such. as it was my first fanfic.
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Ozonelayer
OzonelayerLv14

Chill, I ain’t that old, Dawg.

Desire96:Ayo, dude you are ancient, how is being author this long feels? Give some tips to this ignorant junior
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Desire96
Desire96Lv4

Sure, what you say ~

Ozonelayer:Chill, I ain’t that old, Dawg.
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PrimalWhiteStar
PrimalWhiteStarLv4

The start of the story is good and interesting, so far this is only the second ff about a snow elf and I'm really excited to read both of them, This one because of the FemaleMc and the development of the massacre and maybe a future rise seem promising...the author can send her to Auri.El temple to the other living Snow elf...help each other and save the race...I'm not saying romance between the two, that's for someone else. Thanks for the Story!

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ItsNEVERduck
ItsNEVERduckLv14

The grammar is so bad it gives me a headache trying to figure out what is being said. The pacing is way too fast and slow at the same time. The setting is good because it's Skyrim. The main character is a cool concept but it's severely limited by the terrible writing.

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What was that all about?! there is so much drama, there are no words on chapter 4, I have already given up this nonsense! Such a weak magician just got completely bored ! she was beaten and sold into slavery well done author, you made the worst poppy!

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good Story really like it [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]pls dont drop it [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=golden ticket][img=golden ticket][img=golden ticket][img=golden ticket][img=golden ticket]

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Unique .. . .. . . . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . . . . .

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Blaze_The_amazing
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The writer is not foolish he or she is a great writer so please keep on making more chapters because I will always read this as well.

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second time reading it and I can say that I love this story, the MC is good, the story is good and future look bright 🌞... and yuri stories are one of my favourite

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ok I am going to be real with you I love this story. it just put a smile on my face from the main character to the world building. the author put the time into putting in work to just make you feel like you are reading someone life instead of a character. can't wait for more chapters.

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