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PrimalWhiteStar
PrimalWhiteStarLv41yr
2024-03-19 07:49

second time reading it and I can say that I love this story, the MC is good, the story is good and future look bright 🌞... and yuri stories are one of my favourite

Reworking/ rewriting

Iros
3.9
79 Chs

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truedevil
truedevilLv4

is it straight yuri

8mth
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PrimalWhiteStar
PrimalWhiteStarLv4

yeah, and it's good

truedevil:is it straight yuri
8mth
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DiostdmQXYU
DiostdmQXYULv4

i didn't understand the other guys question, is it yuri?

PrimalWhiteStar:yeah, and it's good
4mth
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PrimalWhiteStar
PrimalWhiteStarLv4

yes

DiostdmQXYU:i didn't understand the other guys question, is it yuri?
4mth
PrimalWhiteStar
PrimalWhiteStarLv4

...i think Yes

DiostdmQXYU:i didn't understand the other guys question, is it yuri?
4mth
DiostdmQXYU
DiostdmQXYULv4

Thanks for answering...... but what do you mean "you think" lol

PrimalWhiteStar:...i think Yes
4mth
1
PrimalWhiteStar
PrimalWhiteStarLv4

🤷🏻‍♂️

DiostdmQXYU:Thanks for answering...... but what do you mean "you think" lol
4mth
1
DiostdmQXYU
DiostdmQXYULv4

PrimalWhiteStar:🤷🏻‍♂️
4mth
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PrimalWhiteStar
PrimalWhiteStarLv4

😂

DiostdmQXYU:
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PrimalWhiteStar
PrimalWhiteStarLv4

The start of the story is good and interesting, so far this is only the second ff about a snow elf and I'm really excited to read both of them, This one because of the FemaleMc and the development of the massacre and maybe a future rise seem promising...the author can send her to Auri.El temple to the other living Snow elf...help each other and save the race...I'm not saying romance between the two, that's for someone else. Thanks for the Story!

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ItsNEVERduck
ItsNEVERduckLv14

The grammar is so bad it gives me a headache trying to figure out what is being said. The pacing is way too fast and slow at the same time. The setting is good because it's Skyrim. The main character is a cool concept but it's severely limited by the terrible writing.

3mth
Hunter_Valcarce
Hunter_ValcarceLv4

pretty good wishes it more chapters coming out that's the only negative part

1yr
funny_lol
funny_lolLv1

What was that all about?! there is so much drama, there are no words on chapter 4, I have already given up this nonsense! Such a weak magician just got completely bored ! she was beaten and sold into slavery well done author, you made the worst poppy!

1yr
florian_lautenbach
florian_lautenbachLv15

good Story really like it [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]pls dont drop it [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=golden ticket][img=golden ticket][img=golden ticket][img=golden ticket][img=golden ticket]

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Haku_Ouroboros
Haku_OuroborosLv12

Reveal spoiler

7mth
Beniss
BenissLv1

Unique .. . .. . . . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . . . . .

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Blaze_The_amazing
Blaze_The_amazingLv4

The writer is not foolish he or she is a great writer so please keep on making more chapters because I will always read this as well.

10mth
UnSpaRing3
UnSpaRing3Lv4

ok I am going to be real with you I love this story. it just put a smile on my face from the main character to the world building. the author put the time into putting in work to just make you feel like you are reading someone life instead of a character. can't wait for more chapters.

1yr
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