Hunter_Valcarce

this is pretty good That's a lot of potential to be good I don't care how powered he is along it's interesting it's fine

it's pretty good keep up with the good work

I think the story has potential could become good .but God damn the same f****** words over and over very interesting or very bad or you know what I mean but holy f*** you don't have to use the same goddamn words over and over again give me a headache just listening to it's fine you have a reactions and commentaries but the hearing over and over and every single God damn chapter it's annoying I'm not even done with this fanfic yet I forgot what chapter I'm on but it hasn't even used his powers yet with the point having that you're not going to use it .

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pretty good so far into the story I hope to be more slice of Life or more fight scenes or doing something with their friend To be honest I thought mama /story MHA will last a little longer then a year and you do have movies and side stories now you killed basically all of me villains ends of the story long good story it fine.

at this point it's pretty good I hope she leans into the villains of things I mean she can be a hero but I'm so sick of seeing heroes.

a little slice of Life on the side just hangs out with friends not a bad idea. doing some shenanigans.

quirk you don't need to make something difficult you know quirk minor enh enhancement like minor strong durability speed and intelligence since it doesn't have to be that hard you don't have to make every quirk special and can stack quirk on top one another minor minor enhancement stronger 2x stronger/durability/intelligence/since you get it do with any kind of quirk he is using two different or more quirk to stack or passive abilities the ones you can't really shut off all for one can shut them off deactivate them

it's pretty good and keep up the good ..

it was pretty good keep up the good work