The homelander will just kill him on the spot until then tell the public to take over the company and victory.

I see all potential in the story pretty well Keep it up

pretty good not bad at all I hope more comes out soon

just do it a harem don't make it big like 3 or 5 or 7 .

yes

It's a pretty good novel I wish you had more detail on the fighting scenes and on the world situation everything else is pretty good

pretty good wishes it more chapters coming out that's the only negative part

pretty pretty good my only complaint is not enough chapters

pretty good like it balances not just using games logic it is realistic I hope you make more

dude that was short anything else come on

I think I have one problem: I think the Minecraft system should be a little more realistic but be more realism as infant water or infant lava too much it be kind of silly just had some limits like he can craft some things you just have to get the resources can't be overpowered

pretty good not bad .Vikings culture is not good but no different from the rest of the world everyone raid does it

I like the size stories pov of other people side how they get pissed or some people get help like these little details little chapters has more volume in the wild world actions they do

he becomes a simp wow .I like how MC wanted to leave freya familiar Now follow her .Do I be confused about the MC his emotions

pretty good hope more comes out earlier.

pretty good hope the chapters are longer

what kind of system will it be is it like Total war Warhammer 3. dawn of War 1... 2/3 are s * .

pretty good hope he continues working on it and finish it

bonus damage to kill org and demons fine but killing them in one hit . kind of silly the other thing with the armory I don't know kind of Bible ish .overclock sure but not to the point you just Spam it that's too much have balance you're just flying bugs in that world in Star ship troopers warHammer 40k maybe seems broken if he just has unlimited ammo and one shot demons

okay unlimited ammo too much maybe a bonus increase magazine the unlimited no