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Kashieeee
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Latest chapter and I'm full of ants hfdchh SO CUTE AND WHOLESOME I SWEAR THE INTERACTIONS HHDVJUYF I like how you're able to open to our eyes how the world would be if able to interact with supernatural beings and the backstories are great! You could do moreee and also more details is greattt AS LONG as it's relevant to the story omg. Also you could also try adding more details when a character reacts like "he looked away, blushing and hands on his mouth, attempting to hide away the embarassment" and stuff. OVERALL I HOPE TO READ MOREEE

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Marionette: Lost Soul

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