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  • Kashieeee
    Kashieeee4mth
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    Read the new chapters and of course I am absolutely loving the interaction between "us" humans and the other worlders :0 I can't wait!

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  • Kashieeee
    Kashieeee4mth
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    Latest chapter and I'm full of ants hfdchh SO CUTE AND WHOLESOME I SWEAR THE INTERACTIONS HHDVJUYF I like how you're able to open to our eyes how the world would be if able to interact with supernatural beings and the backstories are great! You could do moreee and also more details is greattt AS LONG as it's relevant to the story omg. Also you could also try adding more details when a character reacts like "he looked away, blushing and hands on his mouth, attempting to hide away the embarassment" and stuff. OVERALL I HOPE TO READ MOREEE

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  • Kashieeee
    Kashieeee4mth
    Commented

    Damb this is just wholesome and cute AHAHAHAHA Nuuuuu I'm big sad right now :((

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  • Kashieeee
    Kashieeee4mth
    Commented

    Waaaaahhh I was taken aback when Gabriel said "you liked her" 馃槀 it was so sudden 馃槀 do set the mood and/or give more hints that actually speak of those silent feelings 馃槉

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  • Kashieeee
    Kashieeee4mth
    Commented

    I see you've made changes to perfect your story 馃槞

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  • Kashieeee
    Kashieeee5mth
    Commented

    OMG WAAAHHHH AND ALSO MORE ENDINGS LIKE THAT THAT LEAVE YOU HANGING AND WANTING FOR MORE

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  • Kashieeee
    Kashieeee5mth
    Posted

    Hai! I've read through everything and all I can say is, I AM ENJOYING THE STORY SO FAR! Continue writing! I'll be leaving more reviews soon that are more detailed 馃憖

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