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SolAce
SolAceLv34yr
2020-08-23 03:37

The story is just starting, so it’s hard to predict how the plot will go and how detailed it could be. But I’d say that the punctuation and grammar does make me confused sometimes. If you need any help, I’ll try to point out some things. Although, don’t get discouraged ! We all start from somewhere, and I think you have a very good world build, which was my weakest point when I first starting writing. So keep up the good work author !

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deepu_
deepu_Author

Than you so much dear.. This is my first time with writing, I am still learning, it would be helpful if you point out more..

SolAce
SolAceLv3

I’ll try to help as I read. I’m sure you’ve seen some comments I made on certain paragraphs

deepu_
deepu_Author

Yes I have seen.. I will rectify tomorrow, it's already very lat and I am sleepy.. Thank you so much for the help

SolAce
SolAceLv3

Do it whenever you like; your readers will always wait for you. Have a good sleep !

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