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IF YOU DON'T LIKE H@PE, THIS HISTORY IS NOT FOR YOU. The author just screwed Nassisa's image for me. If the author wanted to give her a tragic pastand a reason to betray Lucius, just have been physically abused and mistreated was already enough. if just have been raped by Malfoy and being experimented on was already enough. what the majority of people including myself didn't like was the fact that she didn't have to be fu*ked everybody including voldy and his disgusting Death Eaters. the author made her a wh*re even before marrying Malfoy(she *****d everybody and got g@ng banged by Gryffindor's just to piss him of) and nobody would wish to be in the same place voldemort and his group have been inside. the author managed to ruin the image of someone i had considered a potential romantic interest and this ruined the history for me (and many).
Stuffed into Potter
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Author, if you're reading this comment, i would like to give you a few reasons for why chap.26 is completely unrealistic, absurd, illogical and should be changed. Reason1: purebloods are proud and they care about their reputation above everything. Nassisa, as a black, should be no exception. It is completely unthinkable that she would taint reputation and body (i think a society as backwards as the magical Britannia should care about purity. Especially during the 70tys or 80tys which i think it was the Nassisa's generation's time) by having se× with a bunch of guys (including the Gryffindors) out of displeasure and spite of a fiance she didn't thought it was abusive or at least that much(and probably wouldn't be if she hadn't ashamed him). Reason2: The black's would probably have her expelled from the family by humiliating their name. Reason3:For someone like Lucius that cares about his reputation above everything, I don't think he would agree to share his own wife with any of his colleagues(the death eaters)with the exception of maybe his lord himself. Reason4: Purebloods rape muggles because they think of them as insignificants and it's easy to get away with their crimes against (just erase their memories) and raping another pureblood should have some serious repercussions . Reason5: Valdemort is described as someone who only cares about pursuing immortality and he never seemed to respond Bella's love(even if just se×ually)so i don't think he would act like that. Reason6: If you wanted to give her a tragic background and a reason to betray Lucius, just physical abuse and mistreatment should be enough. I can think of many other reasons but i think I've made my point and my fingers are tired. PLEASE DON'T RUIN THIS HISTORY FOR ME!!!!!!(AND MANY OTHERS). GIVE US OUR NASSISA BACK!!!!
Wow, I can feel the hate, mate... Anyway, that tidbit is there for a reason. If you are afraid about MC being cheated on... THAT will never happen. *spoiler? Dunno* The second MC gets her, even MC won't know exactly how much devoted to him she is. Due to ... reasons. *End* But Narcissa IS a character with a certain past that shaped her. That will shape her decisions later on. If you didn't notice yet, her moral compass won't be dark or light. The way she defied Lucius before marriage shows she was but a teenager (youngest of Black sisters) and didn't have the courage to just up and go as Andromeda did, but neither did she want to just give herself to Lucius. A show of naive defiance. The things that happen to her later on, are what will shape her into a person that will meet MC. A person who will stand by him and be the main pillar of MC during this story. I can't... no, I refuse, to just write that: Narcissa met MC MC told Luci to fk off MC fked Narcissa They were happy ever after. The End... Just... No. You will just have to accept that the characters have their past that shaped them into what they are now. Or drop it. Idc. Mc for example is a normal young ***** transmigrated into Harry Potter in a wizarding world, knowing well he is targeted by Dumbledore and Voldemort but also has foreknowledge and some advantages. He won't pull Rambo and start slaughtering everyone as he goes. He won't be a godlike being from the start. Nor can he ignore the rules of the game just because he is transmigrated. He WILL make mistakes. He will have occasional sad moments when something 'tragic' happens around him. But I won't make him into someone refusing to manipulate others, maybe even bind them with oaths, contracts, etc, just because of some idiotic sense of righteousness. Nor will I make him into someone who will have an emotional breakdown due to every little thing. As for Narcissa. I can't just make a damsel in distress that suffered all her life and otherwise lived as a saint out of her. Narcissa was married. Married to a Death Eater, no less. Do not expect her to be a virgin. She lived among Death Eaters. Do not expect her to have a tender heart. She was raised a Black while seeing everything her own family did to her older sisters. She had a front seat to it and also suffered through it. And it will show. Especially in her actions later on. It will show how she thinks about the wizarding world and to what lengths she is capable to go to *spoiler - not saying any more* . You may see her as a whore and maybe I was too heavy-handed there but... Man. Boarding school. Teenagers. Unwanted betrothal. Do I need to go on to explain more why I said do not expect her to be a virgin?
i never expected her to be a virgin(unless she was virgin Mary). im merely saying the whole rape thing was useless(and unrealistic) and just physical abuse should be enough. i never expected the mc to tell just Lucius to fucu off and get Nassisa to like that easily . read my other comment on this review if you want to know why this chap is completely unrealistic.
KasiCair:Wow, I can feel the hate, mate... Anyway, that tidbit is there for a reason. If you are afraid about MC being cheated on... THAT will never happen. *spoiler? Dunno* The second MC gets her, even MC won't know exactly how much devoted to him she is. Due to ... reasons. *End* But Narcissa IS a character with a certain past that shaped her. That will shape her decisions later on. If you didn't notice yet, her moral compass won't be dark or light. The way she defied Lucius before marriage shows she was but a teenager (youngest of Black sisters) and didn't have the courage to just up and go as Andromeda did, but neither did she want to just give herself to Lucius. A show of naive defiance. The things that happen to her later on, are what will shape her into a person that will meet MC. A person who will stand by him and be the main pillar of MC during this story. I can't... no, I refuse, to just write that: Narcissa met MC MC told Luci to fk off MC fked Narcissa They were happy ever after. The End... Just... No. You will just have to accept that the characters have their past that shaped them into what they are now. Or drop it. Idc. Mc for example is a normal young ***** transmigrated into Harry Potter in a wizarding world, knowing well he is targeted by Dumbledore and Voldemort but also has foreknowledge and some advantages. He won't pull Rambo and start slaughtering everyone as he goes. He won't be a godlike being from the start. Nor can he ignore the rules of the game just because he is transmigrated. He WILL make mistakes. He will have occasional sad moments when something 'tragic' happens around him. But I won't make him into someone refusing to manipulate others, maybe even bind them with oaths, contracts, etc, just because of some idiotic sense of righteousness. Nor will I make him into someone who will have an emotional breakdown due to every little thing. As for Narcissa. I can't just make a damsel in distress that suffered all her life and otherwise lived as a saint out of her. Narcissa was married. Married to a Death Eater, no less. Do not expect her to be a virgin. She lived among Death Eaters. Do not expect her to have a tender heart. She was raised a Black while seeing everything her own family did to her older sisters. She had a front seat to it and also suffered through it. And it will show. Especially in her actions later on. It will show how she thinks about the wizarding world and to what lengths she is capable to go to *spoiler - not saying any more* . You may see her as a whore and maybe I was too heavy-handed there but... Man. Boarding school. Teenagers. Unwanted betrothal. Do I need to go on to explain more why I said do not expect her to be a virgin?
There are people who will be able to ignore your last chapter or even be unaffected by it and will continue to support you, but when it comes to something like rape even if it'll only occur one time in the entire book it should absolutely be placed in the tags so people with an adamant hatred of the tag can avoid your novel. Personally I feel writers should write what they want, after all there will always be people who support them, and if you don't enjoy what you write why bother writing? With that said, you as an author should also provide a warning ahead of time to readers so that they can pass your novel by for something else if it will contain events that are largely controversial and disliked by many people. While people may be heavy-handed in their criticism right now you probably wouldn't have had to deal with nearly as much or even any criticism you are now had it been in the tags initially.
KasiCair:Wow, I can feel the hate, mate... Anyway, that tidbit is there for a reason. If you are afraid about MC being cheated on... THAT will never happen. *spoiler? Dunno* The second MC gets her, even MC won't know exactly how much devoted to him she is. Due to ... reasons. *End* But Narcissa IS a character with a certain past that shaped her. That will shape her decisions later on. If you didn't notice yet, her moral compass won't be dark or light. The way she defied Lucius before marriage shows she was but a teenager (youngest of Black sisters) and didn't have the courage to just up and go as Andromeda did, but neither did she want to just give herself to Lucius. A show of naive defiance. The things that happen to her later on, are what will shape her into a person that will meet MC. A person who will stand by him and be the main pillar of MC during this story. I can't... no, I refuse, to just write that: Narcissa met MC MC told Luci to fk off MC fked Narcissa They were happy ever after. The End... Just... No. You will just have to accept that the characters have their past that shaped them into what they are now. Or drop it. Idc. Mc for example is a normal young ***** transmigrated into Harry Potter in a wizarding world, knowing well he is targeted by Dumbledore and Voldemort but also has foreknowledge and some advantages. He won't pull Rambo and start slaughtering everyone as he goes. He won't be a godlike being from the start. Nor can he ignore the rules of the game just because he is transmigrated. He WILL make mistakes. He will have occasional sad moments when something 'tragic' happens around him. But I won't make him into someone refusing to manipulate others, maybe even bind them with oaths, contracts, etc, just because of some idiotic sense of righteousness. Nor will I make him into someone who will have an emotional breakdown due to every little thing. As for Narcissa. I can't just make a damsel in distress that suffered all her life and otherwise lived as a saint out of her. Narcissa was married. Married to a Death Eater, no less. Do not expect her to be a virgin. She lived among Death Eaters. Do not expect her to have a tender heart. She was raised a Black while seeing everything her own family did to her older sisters. She had a front seat to it and also suffered through it. And it will show. Especially in her actions later on. It will show how she thinks about the wizarding world and to what lengths she is capable to go to *spoiler - not saying any more* . You may see her as a whore and maybe I was too heavy-handed there but... Man. Boarding school. Teenagers. Unwanted betrothal. Do I need to go on to explain more why I said do not expect her to be a virgin?
Hugo_Adam:Author, if you're reading this comment, i would like to give you a few reasons for why chap.26 is completely unrealistic, absurd, illogical and should be changed. Reason1: purebloods are proud and they care about their reputation above everything. Nassisa, as a black, should be no exception. It is completely unthinkable that she would taint reputation and body (i think a society as backwards as the magical Britannia should care about purity. Especially during the 70tys or 80tys which i think it was the Nassisa's generation's time) by having se× with a bunch of guys (including the Gryffindors) out of displeasure and spite of a fiance she didn't thought it was abusive or at least that much(and probably wouldn't be if she hadn't ashamed him). Reason2: The black's would probably have her expelled from the family by humiliating their name. Reason3:For someone like Lucius that cares about his reputation above everything, I don't think he would agree to share his own wife with any of his colleagues(the death eaters)with the exception of maybe his lord himself. Reason4: Purebloods rape muggles because they think of them as insignificants and it's easy to get away with their crimes against (just erase their memories) and raping another pureblood should have some serious repercussions . Reason5: Valdemort is described as someone who only cares about pursuing immortality and he never seemed to respond Bella's love(even if just se×ually)so i don't think he would act like that. Reason6: If you wanted to give her a tragic background and a reason to betray Lucius, just physical abuse and mistreatment should be enough. I can think of many other reasons but i think I've made my point and my fingers are tired. PLEASE DON'T RUIN THIS HISTORY FOR ME!!!!!!(AND MANY OTHERS). GIVE US OUR NASSISA BACK!!!!
Me too, a few days ago i was reading a fanfic on fanfic.net where she appeared and i couldn't take that disgusting image off my head😝😠😭.
Sevennamed:Thanks to the author whenever I see Narcissa's character in another fanfiction I can't get the thought of the vile cvmdvm**ter he turned her into out of my head.
Hugo_Adam:Me too, a few days ago i was reading a fanfic on fanfic.net where she appeared and i couldn't take that disgusting image off my head😝😠😭.image
Lol I agree with you bro. Also why he even need to put her in the harem as we all know in original she love her son dearly . Also I just skim through the latter chapter. In there tonks also got fuçked by a weasly . Come on I was hoping she would be in the harem and also stay virgin but nah author destroy it too. So I think author will give Mc all non-virgin girls as his harem members. So this seriously makes me Wanna puke . Just imagine you marry a girl but someday someone tell you that your wife taste great . Just thinking about it make my anger through the roof .
Sevennamed:Thanks to the author whenever I see Narcissa's character in another fanfiction I can't get the thought of the vile cvmdvm**ter he turned her into out of my head.
ExaltedCrow:For those stull on the fence, the biggest deal breaker for me was narcissa reading harry’s mind and finding out he’s a transmigrator. I cab’t stand when MC tells people they sre from another world, let alone it being mind read from some cumdump whore.
BrabbitX:This novel is still 4.1 stars wow. I guess its true that anything below 4.5 stars is unreadable shit on this website. Even then i have seen many terrible 4.7 stars...
The only problem is you are thinking for today's society... Past spciety was way more tame and virginity for women was kind of sacred. The way you present it is how someone might react in todays spciety and it would be rare again, she might **** a random dude to give up her virginity and make it known but idk many people that willingly get gangbanged, especially if they are raised in a noble house cause it'll give them preconceptions on society and they themselves won't willingly do some things. Especially when they are raised a certain way with some things basically indoctorinated into them.
KasiCair:Wow, I can feel the hate, mate... Anyway, that tidbit is there for a reason. If you are afraid about MC being cheated on... THAT will never happen. *spoiler? Dunno* The second MC gets her, even MC won't know exactly how much devoted to him she is. Due to ... reasons. *End* But Narcissa IS a character with a certain past that shaped her. That will shape her decisions later on. If you didn't notice yet, her moral compass won't be dark or light. The way she defied Lucius before marriage shows she was but a teenager (youngest of Black sisters) and didn't have the courage to just up and go as Andromeda did, but neither did she want to just give herself to Lucius. A show of naive defiance. The things that happen to her later on, are what will shape her into a person that will meet MC. A person who will stand by him and be the main pillar of MC during this story. I can't... no, I refuse, to just write that: Narcissa met MC MC told Luci to fk off MC fked Narcissa They were happy ever after. The End... Just... No. You will just have to accept that the characters have their past that shaped them into what they are now. Or drop it. Idc. Mc for example is a normal young ***** transmigrated into Harry Potter in a wizarding world, knowing well he is targeted by Dumbledore and Voldemort but also has foreknowledge and some advantages. He won't pull Rambo and start slaughtering everyone as he goes. He won't be a godlike being from the start. Nor can he ignore the rules of the game just because he is transmigrated. He WILL make mistakes. He will have occasional sad moments when something 'tragic' happens around him. But I won't make him into someone refusing to manipulate others, maybe even bind them with oaths, contracts, etc, just because of some idiotic sense of righteousness. Nor will I make him into someone who will have an emotional breakdown due to every little thing. As for Narcissa. I can't just make a damsel in distress that suffered all her life and otherwise lived as a saint out of her. Narcissa was married. Married to a Death Eater, no less. Do not expect her to be a virgin. She lived among Death Eaters. Do not expect her to have a tender heart. She was raised a Black while seeing everything her own family did to her older sisters. She had a front seat to it and also suffered through it. And it will show. Especially in her actions later on. It will show how she thinks about the wizarding world and to what lengths she is capable to go to *spoiler - not saying any more* . You may see her as a whore and maybe I was too heavy-handed there but... Man. Boarding school. Teenagers. Unwanted betrothal. Do I need to go on to explain more why I said do not expect her to be a virgin?
rating does mean nothing in this site, most authors manipulate deleting the true honest 2, 3, 4 stars reviews. A lot are a bunch of hypocrites that delete shit 1 star reviews but let the same shit 5 star reviews that add nothing -these two examples are NOT REAL reviews FYI.
BrabbitX:This novel is still 4.1 stars wow. I guess its true that anything below 4.5 stars is unreadable shit on this website. Even then i have seen many terrible 4.7 stars...