This book is truly amazing, the author has an incredible way to captivate you in his narrative, making you want to read more about the MC and what will happen next. I red all the chapters in oen sitting and they were one more amazing than the last. Chapter 1 can be heavy at first because the author goes a bit political about our society (he's 100% right though) in it but don't worry it only serves to justify the MC's motivations and from chapter 2 onwards it's all about One Piece and the MC getting better and stronger each step of the way. He even plans ahead, demostrates a cool head and you will be amazed at his social strategies and behavior. His powers and potential are also amazing. I've red over one thousand fanfictions and this one despite still young has the potential to sit in my top 5 One Piece fanfic. Give it a try and if you don't like chapter 1 just start from 2 and you'll love it.

Ok so jm updating my review after chap 5 so ,To start with the author made god seem like dumb ass saying that he was sorry for being “neglecful” one im not catholic but even an idiot should know that god gave hummanity free will so its not his fault you do what you do stop being a ***** about it .Second the god removed a weakness and the taste of df like holy **** God is such a fuckin pussy hes basically Breast feeding the mc.the mc is one of the most simple minded stupid fucks ive ever seen ****ty mindset and ****ty person. third the author lacks commons sense in general makes me question if he even watched or read the manga cuz holy a pirate worth a 70 Million bounty and knows about Kings haki cmon really luffy Had a bounty of 100milion When he beat crocodile who didnt Even know haki but this random guy in the grandline who Knows about king haKi has a bounty of 70 Million it dosnt add up . Anyways in conclusion i think that the idea is great the author just needs to redo the starting chapters and Learn common sense for one piece and his grammer could use work.

fk...had a heart attack. Was sad, thought u dropped. Thank god u didnt. really like so far. I am going to support this for the sole reason that I like this FF's ' plot ' Plus reading ur starting chp, that was a another reason...seeing as cannon is fked, I like it....hope u do as u've promised ur bks, I;ve read em [the mutant FF and the BNHA FF]..dont do what u did there here...plenty of reviews explain what u did wrong...ie: a dumb MC in the mutant FF and ur nerfed MC in BNHA [YES U EXPLAINED BUT MC has too much OP **** that was neutered..so yah, dont neuter]..point is, avoid what u did in those FF's here, some of the reviews explained ur faults. suggestion: no dumbass MC, this is akainu so dont look at world like anime, look at it with a some what darker look, rather than in the OG, or like most one piece FF's...like angst **** isnt necessary but dont make it happy and friendly. Smart MC, use intelligence. any romance just build, and no perverted retard. GL **: the pic looks dope..who ever made is an artist..good choice on presentation....

The webnovel did not respond to my email i even crossed the 15k limit but they do not ahow the voting button. That book was not evem shown on my creator page and also i didn’t get any notification for that book today. So made another book hope you guys understand and review the book more.

Look SI based fanfics don't need much creativity. But even in this kind of stories they kill the fix with their over the top cringe. From chapter one the MC is so cringe with his righteousness that my skin crawled. It's almost like some 13 year old who watched too much left propaganda and decided to write this.

I like the premise of the novel and the initial motivation of the MC, but I can't get into it because the writing quality is quite bad. This story seriously needs an editor. The myriad grammatical and editing errors detract too much from this story for me to enjoy reading it.

I love the way he’s writing the story especially the banter between the upper echelon of the marines. I can’t wait to see how his version of Akainu mingles with the others of his generation. Particularly dragon. I just wish that the updates weren’t about how Webnovel is ruining the writers progress.

FOR GODS SAKE PLEASE DONT DROP THIS FAN FIC NEW CHAPTERS PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEE 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

hope you start writing again this is better than marvel one and yea when you have 15 K words please delete that 15k long chapter hope you are good in health