Item: One piece: reincarnated as Akainu(revised)(on hitus)
Rating: 5
Author: ImperialWar

ImperialWarLv144yr

2020-08-17 07:05

I like the story and the mc, but i was sad when u almost dropeed, keep writing. Now for the review, its in the begining i like the premise of the story and thr character, now lets wait for more content to talk morr about the novel. Thans

One piece: reincarnated as Akainu(revised)(on hitus)

Edgelord666

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